Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use correct verb forms and articles. Use linking words to add one specific reason. For example, mention one clear benefit (keeping in touch) and one platform with a brief reason.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. It helps me stay in touch with people I care about, and I usually use Instagram because it is easy to share photos and quick messages.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and then add specific examples. Fix tense and vocabulary errors (use 'talk' not 'thought'). Limit to two or three sentences and use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to make it coherent.

Example: I usually talk about my daily life and work with my friends. For example, I tell them about my projects at work and any family news, and we also share how we are feeling.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct grammar (singular/plural, prepositions). Give a brief reason and one clear example. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Example: I prefer chatting with one close friend because I only have a few close friends. For example, I often share personal or family news with my best friend Varsha, and we trust each other.

Suggestion: Be concise and finish the idea. Start with a clear preference, give a specific reason (body language, tone), and use one linking word like 'because' to connect reason. Avoid fillers and incomplete sentences.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see facial expressions and hear tone of voice, which helps you understand emotions better.

Suggestion: Use correct tense and clear vocabulary. Give a short direct answer, then explain briefly how you avoid arguments with a specific example or habit. Remove contradictory or unclear phrases like 'politely unfriendly'.

Example: I rarely argue with friends. We usually discuss disagreements calmly and try to listen to each other, so conflicts do not escalate.

× So I usually prefer to chat with only one friends and because like I have very limited friends.

✓ So I usually prefer to chat with only one friend because I have very few friends.

Use singular 'friend' after 'one' (singular/plural issue). Also 'few' is more natural than 'limited friends'; 'very few friends' correctly quantifies a small number.

× So it really have very good thing that we are in touch with a touch with each other.

✓ So it is really a very good thing that we are in touch with each other.

The subject 'it' requires the verb 'is' (singular). 'Have' is incorrect here (subject-verb agreement). Also remove redundant phrase 'a touch with' and add article 'a' before 'very good thing'.

× It really like feel like good.

✓ It really feels good.

Use adjective 'good' to describe the feeling and the verb form 'feels' for third person singular. Remove redundant 'like'.

× I usually thought about my friends, about my life and my personal life and work life too.

✓ I usually think about my friends, my personal life, and my work life too.

The context is habitual present, so use present tense 'think' instead of past 'thought'. Clean up repetition and parallel structure.

× So there are the things like what am I doing or what really happened in my family too.

✓ So we talk about things like what I am doing or what has happened in my family.

Reorder into a noun clause 'what I am doing' for statement form and use present perfect 'has happened' for recent family events; original word order used question form incorrectly in a statement.

× So it really like a very, uh, different feelings of we chat with each other and uh, stay still, stay in touch, uh.

✓ So it really gives a very different feeling when we chat with each other and stay in touch.

Use singular 'feeling' for general sense, verb 'gives' fits subject, and rephrase 'stay still' which is unnatural here to 'stay in touch'. Remove filler words.

× For example I always share my personal and private news even my family news about to my only one of my best friends is Varsha, so we share each other every news.

✓ For example, I always share my personal and family news with my one best friend, Varsha, so we share every piece of news with each other.

Use 'share... with' (preposition and word order), 'one best friend' instead of 'only one of my best friends', and 'share every piece of news with each other' for natural phrasing. Ensure third person singular forms where necessary and correct word order.

× Of course, I prefer to communicate face to face that really gives us the real life expressions too.

✓ Of course, I prefer to communicate face to face because that really gives us real-life expressions too.

Use conjunction 'because' to show reason instead of 'that'. Hyphenate 'real-life' as a compound adjective and remove extra 'the'.

× So we will, uh, we will understand each other how the emotional expressions and, uh, it's very in, it's very good thing that we talk in real person so that we, we talk accordingly as per the.

✓ We can understand each other's emotional expressions, and it's very good to talk in person so that we can respond appropriately.

Simplify and correct sentence structure: use 'understand each other's emotional expressions', 'talk in person' (not 'real person'), and 'respond appropriately' to finish the idea. Remove repetition and filler words.

× Well, I argue very rarely so I haven't ever any any situation go gotten like that.

✓ Well, I argue very rarely, so I have never been in a situation like that.

Use present perfect 'have never been' to describe life experience; original used incorrect word order and forms ('haven't ever any any situation go gotten' is ungrammatical).

× We usually talk in very politely unfriendly way.

✓ We usually talk in a very polite and friendly way.

Use adjectives 'polite' and 'friendly' with proper order and conjunction 'and'. 'Politely unfriendly' is contradictory and ungrammatical.

× So I never extend my conversation or put my conversation into in that level.

✓ So I never extended my conversations or brought them to that level.

When referring to past events, use past tense 'extended' and 'brought'. Also correct preposition use: 'brought them to that level'.

× So I never never argued with any anyone.

✓ So I have never argued with anyone.

Use present perfect 'have never argued' to indicate at no time up to now. Remove duplicate 'never' and 'any anyone' (redundant).