Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammar errors (e.g. "like they will provide" → "because they"; "make fun" → "have fun").

Example: I enjoy chatting with my friends because we share useful information and have fun together. For example, they often tell me about new movies or interesting news, which helps me learn and relax.

Suggestion: Give a complete, structured answer: start with a topic sentence, then list specific topics and give a short example. Avoid unfinished sentences and repetition. Use linking words (for example, also, and).

Example: We usually talk about movies, TV dramas and current events. For example, last week we discussed a popular drama and shared opinions about the plot, which helped me understand different perspectives.

Suggestion: Make a clear preference statement and explain with reasons and one brief example. Correct grammar ("an introvert", "my friend" → "one friend") and avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I feel more comfortable and can have deeper conversations. However, when I am with a group I join in casual talks about hobbies or plans, for example discussing our goals for the weekend.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and give specific reasons and a short contrast using linking words (however, because). Improve phrasing ("face to face" and "video calls" consistency).

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to read body language and build stronger relationships. Although social media is convenient for quick messages, face-to-face meetings feel more natural and meaningful.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a topic sentence, explain why arguments happen and add a short example or result. Use formal language (avoid slang like "diff"), and reduce repetition.

Example: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends because we have different opinions. For instance, we once disagreed about politics, but after discussing calmly we understood each other better and stayed friends.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends like they will provide me information about different things and I love to make fun with my friends.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because they provide me with information about different things, and I love joking around with them.

The sentence misuses 'like' to introduce a reason and uses 'they will provide' which is unnatural here. Replace 'like' with 'because' to show cause, use present simple 'provide' for habitual actions, add the preposition 'with' after 'provide', and use 'joking around' instead of 'make fun with' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I usually chat with my friends about several things like they give me interesting information about different topics such as movies, dramas or current events and I learn a lot from them. I also like talking with them because.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about several things, such as movies, dramas, or current events; they give me interesting information, and I learn a lot from them. I also like talking with them because it is enjoyable and informative.

The original uses 'like' incorrectly to introduce examples and then has a sentence fragment ending with 'because.' Replace 'like' with 'such as' for examples, split clauses with appropriate punctuation, and complete the fragment by stating the reason. This fixes sentence structure and conjunction usage. Grammar problem type ID:16

× As a introvert person, I prefer to talk with only my friend, but it depends on situation.

✓ As an introvert, I prefer to talk with only one friend, but it depends on the situation.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound ('introvert'), 'one friend' specifies singular rather than 'my friend', and add the definite article 'the' before 'situation.' Also 'person' is unnecessary after 'introvert.' Grammar problem type ID:22

× Whenever I go out with a group of people, I chat with them. We talk about our interest in goal.

✓ Whenever I go out with a group of people, I chat with them. We talk about our interests and goals.

'Interest in goal' is ungrammatical; use the plural 'interests' and 'goals' and the conjunction 'and' to link them. This corrects noun choice and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:26

× But if I'm going with only one friend.

✓ But if I'm going with only one friend, I usually have more personal conversations.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a main clause. Complete the sentence by adding the main idea. This fixes sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer to communicate face to face rather than by video.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than by video calls.

'By video' is vague; use 'by video calls' for clarity and natural usage. The preposition 'by' is acceptable but the noun needed is 'video calls.' Grammar problem type ID:11

× Social media as in this generation we have a lot of apps to talk with my friends, but face to face communication is better than video calls.

✓ In this generation, social media provide many apps to talk with my friends, but face-to-face communication is better than video calls.

The original has awkward word order and missing verb agreement. Start with 'In this generation,' use plural verb 'provide' to match 'social media,' and hyphenate 'face-to-face.' This corrects sentence structure and subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yeah sometimes I argue with my friends, we have different opinions so it's normal to argue with friends.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends; we have different opinions, so it's normal to argue.

Replace informal 'Yeah' with 'Yes' for formality, add appropriate punctuation (semicolon) to join related clauses, and remove the redundant 'with friends' at the end. Grammar and punctuation make the sentence clearer. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Like different people have diff different opinions so that's it doesn't matter if we are arguing or anything at the end we are all friends.

✓ Different people have different opinions, so it doesn't matter if we argue; in the end, we are all friends.

Fix spelling 'diff different' to 'different,' remove filler 'like' at the start, correct 'that's it doesn't' to 'it doesn't,' and simplify 'if we are arguing or anything' to 'if we argue.' Add punctuation to clarify meaning. This addresses errors in word choice and adverbial usage. Grammar problem type ID:13