Part 1
Examiner
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidate
Yes I always chatting with my friends online because my friend and I were studying in different city so we just can chat online or social media.
Examiner
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidate
Well there are so many topic I will chat with my friends. For example when I eat lunch I will send a photo to my friend, show what what meal I eat it and when I have a class I will send a photo too and chat with.
Examiner
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidate
I prefer to chat with a group of people because I think it is convenient to seize the same things to different friends. I will have a group of my friends and we can talk anything in this group and share difference.
Examiner
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidate
Well, I prefer to communicate face to face because I think face to face communicate can catch my friend's emotions quickly and we can have some body language for each other.
Examiner
Do you argue with friends?
Candidate
Oh, this situation is just sometimes will happen when I have different opinions with my friends. We will argue and have a small talk and we will solve it quickly and exchange our opinion for each other.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答要更自然、時態正確並且直接回應問題。可以用一到兩句主題句說明喜歡與否,然後用一兩句具體原因或情境補充,避免語法錯誤和多餘用詞。注意動詞時態和單複數一致,例如 use 'chat' 而不是 'chatting' 作為習慣動作描述。
Example: Yes, I do. I often chat with my friends online because we study in different cities, so social media is the easiest way for us to keep in touch.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 內容需更具體且語句更簡練。先給出總結句,接著用清晰的連接詞(for example, when, and)列舉具體主題,注意名詞單複數與代詞使用,避免重複(如 'what what')。
Example: I usually talk about everyday things. For example, I often send photos of my lunch or share updates about my classes and ask my friends how their day is going.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答要更自然並使用更貼切的表達。先明確表態(group or one-on-one),然後給出1–2個具體原因,使用連接詞如 'because' 或 'so'。避免模糊或不正確的片語(例如 'seize the same things')。
Example: I prefer chatting in a group because it's easier to share news with several friends at once. In a group chat we can discuss plans, share photos, and make decisions more quickly.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答已表達清楚,但可更簡潔自然並修正用詞(例如 'catch emotions' 改為 'read emotions')。先給立場,再用一到兩句具體原因並用連接詞連接。
Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to read people's emotions and use body language, which helps avoid misunderstandings.
Do you argue with friends?
Score: 68.0Suggestion: 回答應更自然並注意語法與流暢度。先回答頻率(e.g. sometimes),然後說明原因和處理方式,使用連接詞(such as, so, and)使層次清楚,避免冗長重複(例如 'we will argue and have a small talk')。
Example: Sometimes we do argue when our opinions differ, but we usually talk it over calmly and resolve the issue by listening to each other's points of view.
× Yes I always chatting with my friends online because my friend and I were studying in different city so we just can chat online or social media.
✓ Yes, I am always chatting with my friends online because my friends and I are studying in different cities, so we can only chat online or on social media.
句中“I always chatting”缺少be动词,应为现在进行时“am always chatting”;“my friend and I were studying”时态应与当前情况一致,使用现在进行时“are studying”;“in different city”名词单复数和冠词错误,改为“in different cities”;“just can chat online or social media”语序与介词缺失,改为“can only chat online or on social media”。建议:使用正确的be动词构成进行时,注意名词单复数和介词搭配。
× Well there are so many topic I will chat with my friends.
✓ Well, there are so many topics I can chat about with my friends.
“so many topic”中topic应为复数topics;此外动词与句子需要介词短语,改为“chat about”。建议:many 后接可数名词复数,注意固定短语‘chat about’。
× For example when I eat lunch I will send a photo to my friend, show what what meal I eat it and when I have a class I will send a photo too and chat with.
✓ For example, when I eat lunch I send a photo to my friend to show what meal I am eating, and when I have a class I also send a photo and chat with them.
句中频率表达与习惯动作应使用一般现在时,故将“will send”改为“send”;“show what what meal I eat it”包含重复词和不必要的代词,应为“to show what meal I am eating”或“to show what I am eating”;句尾“chat with”缺少宾语,补为“chat with them”。建议:描述习惯用一般现在时,去掉重复词并补全宾语。
× I prefer to chat with a group of people because I think it is convenient to seize the same things to different friends.
✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I think it is convenient to share the same things with different friends.
原句中“seize the same things”用词不当,应为“share”;介词“to different friends”应改为“with different friends”。建议:注意动词搭配和介词选择,使用常见搭配‘share ... with ...’。
× I will have a group of my friends and we can talk anything in this group and share difference.
✓ I have a group of friends and we can talk about anything in this group and share different things.
“I will have a group of my friends”表示习惯不需将来时,改为“I have”;“talk anything”应为“talk about anything”;“share difference”搭配不当,改为“share different things”或“share our differences”取决于本意。建议:用正确动词时态和固定搭配,并用复数或名词词组表达“差异”。
× Well, I prefer to communicate face to face because I think face to face communicate can catch my friend's emotions quickly and we can have some body language for each other.
✓ Well, I prefer to communicate face to face because I think face-to-face communication can capture my friends' emotions quickly and we can use body language with each other.
“face to face communicate”词类错误,应使用名词“communication”或形容词短语“face-to-face communication”;“catch my friend's emotions”用词更自然为“capture my friends' emotions”;注意所有格复数应为“friends'”并使用“with each other”来表示相互使用肢体语言。建议:名词与形容词搭配要正确,注意复数所有格和习惯用语。
× Oh, this situation is just sometimes will happen when I have different opinions with my friends.
✓ Oh, this situation sometimes happens when I have different opinions with my friends.
混合了副词位置和将来时“will happen”,描述习惯或经常发生的事应使用一般现在时“happens”;副词“sometimes”位置置于动词之前更自然。建议:描述通常发生的事情用一般现在时,并把频率副词放在主语和谓语之间。
× We will argue and have a small talk and we will solve it quickly and exchange our opinion for each other.
✓ We argue and have a small argument, and we solve it quickly by exchanging our opinions with each other.
原句中“have a small talk”用法不当,small talk通常指轻松闲聊,而争吵应为“small argument”或“a short argument”;时态不一致,描述常态应使用一般现在时;“exchange our opinion for each other”介词和单复数错误,应为“exchange our opinions with each other”。建议:使用恰当词汇表达‘争论’,注意时态一致和介词搭配。