Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết các ý một cách mạch lạc.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my daily experiences. We often talk about my studies, work, and other aspects of life, which makes our conversations interesting and enjoyable.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng chính xác hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện.

Example: I usually chat with my friends about our studies, especially homework and useful tips. Besides that, we also share experiences from our daily lives to relax and support each other.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết các ý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I prefer chatting with a group of people. For example, I have a group of four friends, and we often discuss our daily lives, which makes the conversation more enjoyable and diverse.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác và lặp từ. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho sở thích của bạn.

Example: It depends on the situation. I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to express emotions better. However, social media is useful for staying connected easily and managing conversations when we are busy.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích nguyên nhân cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng.

Example: Sometimes, I have small arguments with my friends because it's hard to understand each other's emotions through social media. Misunderstandings can happen when we communicate online.

× earlier referred to chatting with my friend to discuss about my study, my work and something in my life

✓ earlier referred to chatting with my friend to discuss my study, my work and something in my life

The preposition 'about' is unnecessary after 'discuss'. The verb 'discuss' is directly followed by the object without 'about'.

× So I feel so funny and exciting and I love chatting with my friend to say about my daily life

✓ So I feel so happy and excited and I love chatting with my friend to talk about my daily life

'Funny' and 'exciting' are incorrect here; 'funny' means humorous, and 'exciting' is an adjective describing something that causes excitement. The correct adjectives to describe feelings are 'happy' and 'excited'. Also, 'say about' should be 'talk about'.

× You are usually chatting with my friend about my study because we can't have each other about the homework and shared useful tips

✓ I usually chat with my friend about my study because we can help each other with the homework and share useful tips

The pronoun 'You' is incorrect; the speaker should use 'I'. Also, 'can't have each other' is incorrect; it should be 'can help each other'. The verb tense should be consistent: 'share' instead of 'shared'.

× Beside, we also talking about my daily life and can share the experience to umm uh relax and can talk together

✓ Besides, we also talk about my daily life and can share experiences to relax and talk together

'Beside' should be 'Besides' to mean 'in addition'. 'Talking' should be 'talk' to match the auxiliary verb. 'Share the experience' should be 'share experiences' (plural). 'To umm uh relax' is informal and should be 'to relax'.

× You are referred to chat with a proof of people

✓ You are referred to chat with a group of people

'Proof' is incorrect; the correct word is 'group'. Also, 'You are referred to chat' is awkward; it should be 'I prefer to chat'.

× Uh, I have a group with four people and we can discuss about my daily life as it's so good and uh, we can have the experience about chatting

✓ Uh, I have a group of four people and we can discuss my daily life as it's so good and uh, we can share experiences about chatting

'Group with four people' should be 'group of four people'. 'Discuss about' should be 'discuss'. 'Have the experience about chatting' is awkward; 'share experiences about chatting' is better.

× It's depends, uh, some, uh, time

✓ It depends, uh, sometimes

'It's depends' is incorrect; 'It depends' is correct. 'Some time' should be 'sometimes' to mean 'occasionally'.

× But sometimes I think social medias is help us to connect with people easily and can control the communication

✓ But sometimes I think social media helps us to connect with people easily and can control the communication

'Social medias' is incorrect; 'social media' is uncountable and singular. 'Is help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject.

× Oh, it's sometimes I feel ugly with my friends because we can understand of each other through the social media

✓ Oh, sometimes I feel upset with my friends because we can understand each other through social media

'It's sometimes I feel ugly' is incorrect; 'sometimes I feel upset' is better. 'Understand of each other' should be 'understand each other'. 'The social media' should be 'social media'.

× we can understand the emotional which we express on the Internet

✓ we can understand the emotions which we express on the Internet

'Emotional' is an adjective; the noun 'emotions' is correct here.

× So we have some small arguments about this

✓ So we have some small arguments about this

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.