Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but contains some unnatural phrases and redundancy. For example, 'radical or the messenger applications' is unclear and 'everyday lives' and 'daily experiences' are repetitive. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid repeating similar ideas.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially through messaging apps like WhatsApp or Messenger. We often talk about our daily lives and share interesting experiences.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains filler words and unclear expressions. Avoid using 'uh' and vague phrases like 'like this' or 'so curly things'. Be more specific and structured in your response.

Example: We usually chat about various topics, such as beauty tips. For example, my friends and I often discuss how to improve makeup skills, like applying mascara properly to make eyelashes look curled and fuller.

Suggestion: Your answer conveys your preference but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid awkward phrases like 'because of my behavior so that I feel fair just'.

Example: Actually, I am quite an introverted person, so I prefer chatting one-on-one rather than in a group. Talking to many people at once can be overwhelming for me.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear and incomplete sentences, such as 'pace to pace communication' and 'I just prefer we are'. Use correct phrases like 'face-to-face' and complete your thoughts clearly.

Example: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication when I am with close friends, classmates, or family because it feels more personal and comfortable. However, when talking to people I don't know well, I usually prefer to communicate via social media.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but contains a small grammatical error ('This often communication'). Also, you can improve coherence by using linking words like 'so' or 'which'.

Example: No, I rarely argue with my friends because we understand each other well. If we ever have a disagreement, we try to find a solution together, which helps us avoid serious conflicts and maintain a good relationship.

× Yes, I really enjoy talking with my friends, especially through the radical or the messenger applications.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy talking with my friends, especially through the Radikal or Messenger applications.

The names of applications should be capitalized as proper nouns. Also, 'radical' seems to be a typo or incorrect name; it should be 'Radikal' or the correct app name. Preposition 'through' is correct here.

× It depends, uh, but we usually talk about our daily experiences such as how to, uh, improve your makeup skill, like the girls chatting, like how to apply your mascara just like this.

✓ It depends, uh, but we usually talk about our daily experiences such as how to, uh, improve our makeup skills, like girls chatting, like how to apply mascara just like this.

The pronouns should be consistent; since the speaker is talking about their own group, 'your' should be 'our'. Also, 'makeup skill' should be plural 'makeup skills' to match the context.

× It's so curly things, you know?

✓ They're such curly things, you know?

The phrase 'It's so curly things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and cannot be referred to by 'it'. Also, 'so' should be replaced with 'such' to modify plural noun 'things'.

× Actually I'm quite introverted person, so I prefer chatting with one person rather than a group of people because chatting with many people once can be difficult for me because of my behavior so that I feel fair just.

✓ Actually, I'm quite an introverted person, so I prefer chatting with one person rather than a group of people because chatting with many people at once can be difficult for me because of my behavior, so I feel fair just.

The phrase 'quite introverted person' needs an article 'an' before 'introverted person'. Also, 'once' should be 'at once' to mean simultaneously. The sentence is a bit unclear at the end but corrected for grammar.

× Actually, I definitely prefer pace to pace communication when I'm with people I'm close like my friends, classmates, or family because it feels more personal and comfortable.

✓ Actually, I definitely prefer face-to-face communication when I'm with people I'm close to, like my friends, classmates, or family because it feels more personal and comfortable.

The phrase 'pace to pace' is incorrect; it should be 'face-to-face'. Also, 'people I'm close' should be 'people I'm close to' to use the correct preposition.

× However, when I communicate with people I don't know well, I just prefer we are.

✓ However, when I communicate with people I don't know well, I just prefer we are online.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'online' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'prefer we are' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to be' or 'prefer communicating online'.

× This often communication helps us avoid serious conflicts and maintain a good relationship.

✓ This often communication helps us avoid serious conflicts and maintain a good relationship.

The phrase 'This often communication' is incorrect. It should be 'This frequent communication' or 'This often helps us'. However, since the instruction is to correct only mistakes in the list, this is a sentence structure issue but not listed, so no correction applied.