Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your preference and providing clear reasons. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, mostly through mobile phones. However, I prefer face-to-face conversations when discussing personal problems because it's easier to understand each other and find solutions.

Suggestion: Your answer covers relevant content but lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Be more specific about the topics you discuss to enrich your answer.

Example: I usually chat about my emotions and feelings regarding our friendship. Additionally, I share my work experiences and daily life stories, especially since I live far from my friends.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid repetition. Clarify your points with smoother sentence structures.

Example: It depends on the situation. At work, I prefer chatting with a group of colleagues to collaborate effectively. However, when I'm at home alone, I prefer talking to a single friend to share my ideas and personal matters.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your preference clearly and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows people to better understand each other's problems and find effective solutions with guidance from friends and family.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly, explaining when and why you argue with friends. Use complete sentences and avoid confusing phrases.

Example: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends about important topics that can be either beneficial or harmful. We discuss these issues calmly to understand each other's views and resolve any disagreements.

× Yes, I love to chat with my friends from mobile phones.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with my friends using mobile phones.

The verb 'love' is commonly followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Also, 'from mobile phones' is incorrect; 'using mobile phones' is the proper prepositional phrase.

× I will prefer to more likely to talk with them face to face chatting, but to share my problems when they given me some solution.

✓ I prefer to talk with them face to face, but I share my problems when they give me some solutions.

'Will prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' is sufficient to express preference. 'More likely to' is redundant here. 'Face to face chatting' should be 'talk with them face to face'. Also, 'they given me' should be 'they give me' to match present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer to share my emotions, my feelings towards my friendships that I talk about them.

✓ I prefer to share my emotions and feelings about my friendships when I talk about them.

'Feelings towards' is less common; 'feelings about' is more appropriate. Also, the sentence structure was awkward; adding 'and' and 'when' clarifies the meaning.

× I always share my experience about my work and my daily life story with them because I live far from from them.

✓ I always share my experiences about my work and my daily life stories with them because I live far from them.

'Experience' and 'story' should be plural to match the context of multiple instances. Also, 'from from' is a typo and should be 'from'.

× It depends on situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

The phrase 'depends on situation' is incomplete; it requires the definite article 'the' before 'situation'.

× If I I am in my working environment, I have to help from my working partners.

✓ If I am in my working environment, I have to get help from my working partners.

The repeated 'I' is a typo. Also, 'have to help from' is incorrect; it should be 'have to get help from' to indicate receiving assistance.

× For that I have to choose a work group.

✓ For that, I have to choose a work group.

This sentence is grammatically correct; only a comma is added for clarity.

× But if I am only alone in my home, I need friend to share my ideas and my life situation.

✓ But if I am alone at home, I need a friend to share my ideas and my life situation.

'Friend' needs the indefinite article 'a' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'only alone' is redundant; 'alone' suffices. 'In my home' is better as 'at home'.

× I already mentioned that I prefer to use face to face conversation because it really helpful to everyone to seek their problems for creating various type of solution for them by getting guidelines from their friends and families.

✓ I already mentioned that I prefer face-to-face conversation because it is really helpful for everyone to discuss their problems and create various types of solutions by getting guidance from their friends and families.

'Prefer to use face to face conversation' should be 'prefer face-to-face conversation'. 'Helpful to everyone to seek their problems' is incorrect; it should be 'helpful for everyone to discuss their problems'. 'Various type' should be plural 'types'. 'Guidelines' is better as 'guidance' in this context.

× Yes, sometimes I do it with my friends about any important topics which are really beneficial or harmful.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends about important topics that are really beneficial or harmful.

'Do it' is vague; 'argue' is more precise. 'Which are' should be 'that are' for defining clauses. 'Any important topics' is better as 'important topics'.

× We both talk about it convenient or basically harmful ways and I we tries to address the.

✓ We both talk about it in convenient or basically harmful ways, and we try to address them.

The sentence had multiple errors: missing preposition 'in' before 'convenient', 'I we tries' is incorrect and should be 'we try', and 'the' is incomplete; 'them' refers to the topics discussed.