Part 1
Examiner
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidate
Yes, I like chatting with friends. I like to share my recently experiences with them and also I would like to know their recent. Situation.
Examiner
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidate
We usually chatting about small things that happened in my in our daily life such as, uh, the uh, delicious take out I have found it or the funny, funny videos we found in the Internet.
Examiner
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidate
To be honest I would like to chat with only one friend because I I will be nervous when I facing a group of people but when I face one friend I will relaxed and then I can chat with her more more approximately.
Examiner
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidate
Well, I prefer chatting on social media because nowadays people are really busy at their work or study. Chatting on social media allowed us communicate everywhere and every time it is convenient.
Examiner
Do you argue with friends?
Candidate
To be honest, it is a really rare situation because me and my friends, we can totally understand each other and when we have different opinions, we can come down and listen to us, listen to other and also respect.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然,如'recently experiences'应为'recent experiences','their recent. Situation'表达不完整。建议注意时态和名词复数形式,避免断句不连贯。
Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I like sharing my recent experiences with them and also learning about their current situations.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误,如'We usually chatting'应为'We usually chat',且表达重复('uh'和'funny, funny'),影响流畅性。建议减少口头语,注意动词形式,表达更简洁自然。
Example: We usually chat about small things that happen in our daily lives, such as delicious takeout I have discovered or funny videos we found on the Internet.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复,如'I I', 'more more approximately'表达不清晰。'when I facing'应为'when I face'。建议注意主谓一致,避免重复,表达更准确。
Example: To be honest, I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel nervous when facing a group of people. When I talk to one friend, I feel relaxed and can communicate more comfortably.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答表达基本清晰,但存在语法错误,如'allowed us communicate'应为'allows us to communicate'。建议注意时态和介词使用,使表达更准确。
Example: Well, I prefer chatting on social media because nowadays people are very busy with work or study. Social media allows us to communicate anytime and anywhere, which is very convenient.
Do you argue with friends?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法和表达不清晰的问题,如'come down and listen to us, listen to other'不合逻辑。建议使用更准确的表达,避免重复,增强逻辑性。
Example: To be honest, it is rare for me to argue with my friends because we understand each other well. When we have different opinions, we stay calm, listen to each other, and show respect.
× I like to share my recently experiences with them and also I would like to know their recent. Situation.
✓ I like to share my recent experiences with them and also I would like to know their recent situation.
recently 是副词,修饰动词;这里需要形容词 recent 来修饰名词 experiences 和 situation。应使用形容词 recent。
× We usually chatting about small things that happened in my in our daily life such as, uh, the uh, delicious take out I have found it or the funny, funny videos we found in the Internet.
✓ We usually chat about small things that happened in our daily life such as the delicious takeout I have found or the funny videos we found on the Internet.
动词 usually 后应接动词原形 chat,而不是现在分词 chatting。"in my in our" 是重复,应改为 "in our"。"take out" 应写为一个词 "takeout"。"found it" 中的 it 多余,应去掉。"in the Internet" 应为 "on the Internet",介词使用错误。
× To be honest I would like to chat with only one friend because I I will be nervous when I facing a group of people but when I face one friend I will relaxed and then I can chat with her more more approximately.
✓ To be honest, I would like to chat with only one friend because I will be nervous when I face a group of people but when I face one friend I will be relaxed and then I can chat with her more approximately.
动词后应使用原形或正确形式,"when I facing" 应为 "when I face"。"I will relaxed" 应为 "I will be relaxed",缺少助动词 be。"more more approximately" 表达不清,去掉重复的 more。
× Chatting on social media allowed us communicate everywhere and every time it is convenient.
✓ Chatting on social media allows us to communicate everywhere and anytime; it is convenient.
时态应与上下文一致,使用一般现在时 allows。动词 communicate 前应加不定式 to。"every time" 应改为 "anytime" 更合适。句子结构需调整使表达更通顺。
× To be honest, it is a really rare situation because me and my friends, we can totally understand each other and when we have different opinions, we can come down and listen to us, listen to other and also respect.
✓ To be honest, it is a really rare situation because my friends and I can totally understand each other and when we have different opinions, we can calm down, listen to each other and also respect each other.
"me and my friends" 应为 "my friends and I",主格用法。"come down" 应为 "calm down"。"listen to us" 应为 "listen to each other",代词使用错误。"listen to other" 应为 "listen to each other"。缺少 "each other" 使句意完整。