Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by avoiding repetition and using correct sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps relieve stress. When we feel overwhelmed, talking and laughing together makes things easier.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to give a direct answer first, then add specific examples using linking words to make your response coherent.

Example: It depends on the friend. If we share the same interests, we usually talk about those hobbies. Otherwise, we chat about our daily lives or other topics.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete thoughts. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid unnecessary or confusing phrases.

Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for deeper communication. In a group, if someone makes me uncomfortable, it's hard to have meaningful conversations.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why using linking words and specific reasons.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it makes me feel more comfortable. Although social media is convenient, meeting in person helps us understand each other better.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your opinion with specific reasons and examples using linking words.

Example: Yes, arguing sometimes happens in friendships. However, these arguments help us resolve issues and strengthen our relationship.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my I do like to chatting with my friends and sometimes we just, uh, got too much pressure and we need to talk with somebody, communicate with them and and laugh and make something easier.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends and sometimes we just, uh, get too much pressure and we need to talk with somebody, communicate with them and laugh and make things easier.

The phrase 'I do like to chatting' is incorrect because 'like' should be followed by either the gerund ('chatting') or the infinitive ('to chat'), not 'to chatting'. Also, 'got' should be 'get' to match the present tense context. 'Make something easier' is vague; 'make things easier' is more natural.

× And it depends. Some we might talk different things with different person. Maybe we got the same interest so that we can talk about the interest or something else or our daily life or something.

✓ And it depends. Sometimes we might talk about different things with different people. Maybe we have the same interests so that we can talk about those interests or something else or our daily life or something.

The phrase 'talk different things with different person' is incorrect. The verb 'talk' is usually followed by 'about' when referring to topics. Also, 'person' should be plural 'people' to match 'different'. 'Got' should be 'have' in present tense. 'Interest' should be plural 'interests' to match context.

× Of obviously only one friend, sometimes a girl. If they're someone who you don't like in a group that makes you just uncomfortable and you can't have a deep communication. But things turn turn points.

✓ Obviously, only one friend, sometimes a girl. If there is someone you don't like in a group, that makes you uncomfortable and you can't have deep communication. But things turn points.

The phrase 'Of obviously' is incorrect; 'Obviously' alone suffices. 'They're someone' is incorrect; 'there is someone' is correct for existence. 'Deep communication' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. The phrase 'things turn turn points' is unclear and likely a misstatement.

× MMM maybe why social media is just convenient but safe to face can make me more comfortable and we can just we can just know each understand each other what they are doing more easier or something like that.

✓ Maybe social media is just convenient, but face-to-face communication makes me more comfortable and we can understand each other better and know what they are doing more easily or something like that.

The phrase 'safe to face' is incorrect; it should be 'face-to-face'. 'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' already implies comparison; 'more easily' is the correct adverb form. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× It argues something it will truly happen in a relationship. We all argue something dynamic us have a deeper, deeper friendship and we always argue argue those things in our real life so that we can fix the question.

✓ Arguments will truly happen in a relationship. We all argue sometimes; this makes us have a deeper friendship and we always argue about those things in our real life so that we can fix the problems.

'It argues something' is incorrect; 'arguments' is the subject and plural. 'Dynamic us have' is incorrect; likely intended 'this makes us have'. Repetition of 'argue' is unnecessary. 'Fix the question' is incorrect; 'fix the problems' is appropriate.