Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some hesitations and unclear phrases like "maybe stories". Try to be more concise and clear, avoid filler words, and complete your sentences properly.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me learn about their hobbies and interesting experiences. Sometimes, chatting also helps me relax after a busy day.

Suggestion: Your answer is too short and unclear, especially the phrase "newly and new stories that we that I heard". Try to give a clear topic sentence and add specific examples using linking words.

Example: I usually chat about basketball because we all enjoy the sport. Additionally, we share new stories or news that we have recently heard, which keeps our conversations interesting.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Clarify your preference clearly and use linking words to explain reasons. Also, correct pronoun usage and sentence structure.

Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in a group, it can be chaotic and I might not get a chance to speak. One-on-one conversations allow me to understand my friend better.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains hesitations. Try to finish your thoughts clearly and avoid filler words. Provide a complete comparison between face-to-face and social media communication.

Example: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to see facial expressions and have a more focused conversation. However, social media is convenient when meeting in person is not possible.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, especially the phrase "some kind of body. Please." Try to express your ideas clearly and provide specific reasons or examples for arguing with friends.

Example: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions. For example, we might disagree about which movie to watch or where to go for dinner.

× Yes, of course I like chatting with my friends because chatting with my peers, I can often learn about their hobbies, their maybe stories and uh, their interesting experiences and sometimes I chat with them to relax and.

✓ Yes, of course I like chatting with my friends because chatting with my peers, I can often learn about their hobbies, their stories, and their interesting experiences, and sometimes I chat with them to relax.

The phrase 'their maybe stories' is incorrect because 'maybe' is an adverb and cannot modify 'stories' directly. It should be removed or replaced with a correct adjective. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete. The correction removes 'maybe' and completes the sentence properly.

× I usually chat about basketball and newly and new stories that we that I heard with my friends.

✓ I usually chat about basketball and new stories that I have heard with my friends.

The phrase 'newly and new stories' is redundant and incorrect. 'Newly' is an adverb and cannot modify 'stories' directly. The correct adjective is 'new'. Also, 'that we that I heard' is confusing and redundant; 'that I have heard' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So chatting with only one friends can help me better learn she or her.

✓ So chatting with only one friend can help me better learn about her.

The word 'friends' is plural but should be singular 'friend' because it refers to 'only one'. Also, 'learn she or her' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'learn about her' to indicate understanding the person better.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to see each other's umm, uh, expressions and allows us to have a more focused conversation.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to see each other's expressions and have a more focused conversation.

The phrase 'see each other's umm, uh, expressions and allows us' is awkward and redundant. 'Each other's' already implies mutuality, so 'allows us' is unnecessary. Also, filler words 'umm, uh' should be omitted for clarity.

× Yes, sometimes I would argue with my friends. Uh, like when we have different opinions or we have some kind of body. Please.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends, like when we have different opinions or some kind of problem.

The phrase 'some kind of body. Please.' is incorrect and unclear. It seems to be a mishearing or miswriting of 'some kind of problem'. Also, 'would argue' is less appropriate here than simple present 'argue' to express habitual action. Filler words like 'Uh' should be omitted.