Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy and use linking words to enhance coherence. For example, use 'sharing' instead of 'share' and connect ideas with 'because' or 'as'.

Example: Yes, I like chatting with friends because I enjoy catching up with them and sharing stories. It is a great way to unwind and relax, and chatting also helps deepen our friendship. Moreover, I like to hear different perspectives and learn new things.

Suggestion: Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and add more specific examples to enrich the content.

Example: We sometimes talk about current events, such as recent news stories and trends on social media. For instance, we recently discussed a popular viral video. It's interesting to hear different opinions during these conversations.

Suggestion: Avoid redundancy and improve word choice. Replace 'intimacy interest' with 'intimacy' and combine sentences for clarity.

Example: I prefer to talk to just one person because I enjoy the intimacy that comes with it. I feel more comfortable sharing my thoughts with a close friend.

Suggestion: Provide a complete sentence for the first part and correct subject-verb agreement. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: It depends on the situation. For important talks, I prefer face-to-face communication, but for casual chats or when I'm busy, I prefer social media because it is easier. Additionally, I use it to keep in touch with friends and family who live far away.

Suggestion: Use more precise vocabulary and improve sentence structure. Replace 'indifferences' with 'differences' and clarify the resolution process.

Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, usually about current events or personal preferences. However, we resolve our disagreements quickly because it helps us understand each other better.

× I enjoy catching up with them and share some stories.

✓ I enjoy catching up with them and sharing some stories.

After the verb 'enjoy', the following verb should be in the '-ing' form to maintain grammatical correctness. Therefore, 'share' should be changed to 'sharing'.

× I enjoy the intimacy interest that comes with talking to just one friend.

✓ I enjoy the intimate interest that comes with talking to just one friend.

The word 'intimacy' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adjective to describe 'interest'. Therefore, 'intimate' is the correct adjective form to use here.

× I use it to keep in touch with friends and family who lives far away.

✓ I use it to keep in touch with friends and family who live far away.

The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'friends and family', which is plural, so the verb should be 'live' instead of 'lives' to agree in number.

× We usually have indifferences about current events or personal preferences, but we resolve it quickly because it helps us understand each other more.

✓ We usually have differences of opinion about current events or personal preferences, but we resolve them quickly because it helps us understand each other more.

The word 'indifferences' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'differences of opinion'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'differences'.