Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，例如“it's great to have a child after meal in the cafeteria”这句话不符合语境，且有重复和犹豫词汇。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免语法错误和无关内容。

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and create memorable moments together.

Suggestion: 回答中表达了观点，但句子结构较为简单且有语法错误，如“each others”应为“each other's”，且句子较长缺少适当连接词。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词，使内容更连贯。

Example: We usually talk about our recent experiences and feelings because it helps us stay connected and maintain our friendship.

Suggestion: 回答思路清晰，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“something depression”应为“something depressing”，“anyone person”应为“one person”。建议注意词汇的准确使用和语法的正确性。

Example: It depends on the situation. At parties, I enjoy chatting with groups, but when I have personal issues, I prefer talking to one close friend to express myself clearly.

Suggestion: 回答表达了观点并给出理由，但存在重复和语法问题，如“watch that another person's facial expressions”应为“observe another person's facial expressions”，且“language, body languages”表达重复。建议简洁准确表达。

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can observe facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand the person better than through social media.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“issues happened around myself”应为“issues that happen around me”，“argumentations”应为“arguments”。建议使用更自然的表达和正确的语法。

Example: Sometimes I argue with my friends about personal issues because they don't always understand my feelings. However, we rarely argue about general topics.

× it's uh, great to have a child after meal in the, in your cafeteria.

✓ it's uh, great to have a chat after a meal in your cafeteria.

这里的 'a child' 应该是 'a chat'，表示聊天；'after meal' 应该加冠词变成 'after a meal'，表示饭后。冠词使用错误导致句意不清。

× We often chat about each others recent stories, it's a good way to express our ideas and feelings through this way and also we can know each others news to keep our friendships forever.

✓ We often chat about each other's recent stories; it's a good way to express our ideas and feelings this way, and also we can know each other's news to keep our friendships forever.

'each others' 应该是所有格形式 'each other's'，表示彼此的。'through this way' 改为 'this way' 更自然。逗号应改为分号或句号以分隔两个独立句子。

× I'd like to chat with everybody and having fun together.

✓ I'd like to chat with everybody and have fun together.

动词并列时，第二个动词应使用原形 'have'，而不是动名词 'having'。

× I'd like to share it with anyone person.

✓ I'd like to share it with one person.

'anyone person' 是错误搭配，应使用 'one person' 表示某一个人。

× This gives me the chance to, uh, watch that another person's facial expressions and the language, body languages so that I can understand this person more clearly, uh, compared with social media.

✓ This gives me the chance to, uh, watch another person's facial expressions and body language so that I can understand this person more clearly, uh, compared with social media.

'watch that another person' 中 'that' 多余，应去掉。'body languages' 应为不可数名词 'body language'。

× I sometimes argue with my friends about issues happened around myself.

✓ I sometimes argue with my friends about issues that happened around me.

'issues happened' 应加关系代词 'that'，且 'myself' 用法不当，应改为宾格 'me'。

× You know, sometimes they just can't understand your feeling and and so we have some argumentations about one thing.

✓ You know, sometimes they just can't understand your feelings, and so we have some arguments about one thing.

'feeling' 应为复数 'feelings'，'argumentations' 不是常用词，应改为 'arguments'。

× However, when it comes to some common knowledge, we don't have arguments.

✓ However, when it comes to common knowledge, we don't have arguments.

'common knowledge' 是不可数名词，前面不加 'some'。