Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, explain why you prefer video calls and how it helps you share emotions.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially through video calls. This way, I can share my problems and feelings more openly because I can see their reactions. Video calls help us understand each other better than just texting.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structures. Use linking words like 'if' and 'but' properly to show contrast.

Example: It depends on the friend. If she is my best friend, I share all my daily activities with her. But if she is just an acquaintance, I only talk about important things, like school or studies.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in a group, it is hard to discuss personal problems. Also, some friends in the group might feel uncomfortable with my opinions. Therefore, one-on-one chats are better for me.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts and use correct sentence structures. Use linking words to compare face-to-face and social media communication.

Example: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is easier to share my problems and emotions. When we talk in person, the other person can understand me better. On the other hand, social media sometimes causes misunderstandings.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating the same words. Use linking words to explain the conditions when you argue.

Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when there is a misunderstanding. If they are wrong, I explain my point, and if I am wrong, I admit it. It depends on the situation.

× I do like chatting with friends about rather than chatting.

✓ I do like chatting with friends rather than just chatting.

The original sentence is unclear and redundant. The phrase 'about rather than chatting' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning by removing redundancy and properly using the gerund 'chatting' after 'like'.

× I love video calls with my friends because I can share every problem, misunderstanding without any hesitations and I think there if we do a video calls then we can share our emotional we can share more emotion.

✓ I love video calls with my friends because I can share every problem and misunderstanding without any hesitation, and I think if we do video calls, then we can share our emotions more.

The original sentence has run-on structure and incorrect conjunction use. 'And' should connect two independent clauses properly. Also, 'a video calls' is incorrect; it should be 'video calls'. 'Emotional' is an adjective, but the noun 'emotions' is needed here.

× I it depends on friends whether see is my best friend or only friend.

✓ It depends on the friends whether she is my best friend or only friend.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun use: 'I it' is redundant and 'see' is incorrect instead of 'she'. Also, 'friends' should be preceded by 'the' to specify.

× If she is my best friend then I see her my every activities but if she is my only friend then I see her some important things only which is a related maybe related to studies.

✓ If she is my best friend, then I see her in all my activities, but if she is my only friend, then I share only some important things with her, which may be related to studies.

The original sentence has plural and singular mismatches: 'my every activities' should be 'all my activities'. Also, 'which is a related maybe related to studies' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'which may be related to studies'.

× I prefer to chat with the only one friend because in Group we can't see our problem and day-to-day activities.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because in a group we can't see our problems and day-to-day activities.

'The only one friend' is incorrect; it should be 'only one friend'. 'Group' needs an article 'a'. 'Problem' should be plural 'problems' to match 'activities'.

× in Group there are different kinds of friends who if would might be feel uncomfortable with my order.

✓ In a group, there are different kinds of friends who might feel uncomfortable with me.

The original sentence has incorrect modal verb sequence 'if would might be' and 'my order' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'might feel uncomfortable with me'.

× So I prefer to chat with only one friends. Only one.

✓ So I prefer to chat with only one friend. Only one.

'One friends' is incorrect because 'one' requires singular noun 'friend'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face up because I it make me easier to share my problem.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it makes it easier for me to share my problems.

'Face to face up' is incorrect; 'face to face' is correct. 'I it make' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes'. Also, 'problem' should be plural 'problems' to generalize.

× And if we share our problem and problem face to face then we can share our emotion too and we can make him or her to understand very easily.

✓ And if we share our problems face to face, then we can share our emotions too, and we can make him or her understand very easily.

'Problem and problem' is redundant; use 'problems'. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions'. 'Make him or her to understand' is incorrect; 'make him or her understand' is correct.

× But in social media they might.

✓ But on social media, they might not understand as well.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'In social media' should be 'on social media'. The sentence needs completion to convey the intended meaning.

× If there is any misunderstanding then I argue with my friend.

✓ If there is any misunderstanding, then I argue with my friend.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs a comma after the conditional clause for clarity.

× But it depends on the chat that I have done with my friends.

✓ But it depends on the chat that I have had with my friends.

'Have done' is incorrect here; 'have had' is the correct present perfect form for 'chat'.

× Ipsy is wrong then I argue.

✓ If he or she is wrong, then I argue.

'Ipsy' is unclear and likely a typo. It should be 'If he or she is wrong'.

× If I I'm also wrong then I argue.

✓ If I am also wrong, then I argue.

'If I I'm' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'If I am'.

× It depends upon the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

'Depends on' is the correct prepositional phrase; 'depends upon' is less common and can be replaced with 'depends on' for simplicity.