Part 1
Examiner
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidate
Yes, of course, I like chatting with my best friends and he he's called Jackson, you know, I like share a lot of my opinions and we lose my facing the difficult situation. So he is a talented boy. He always give me a violating of advice to help me solve the situation.
Examiner
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidate
Uh, yes, I usually chat with my friends because I think chat chat something each other can explore a lot of new knowledgeable, you know a single brainer thinking just limited. But if a group person can make a lot of creative umm news.
Examiner
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidate
I think it depends on the different situations. If finish a group assignments I need to chat with my group members like 34 peoples to get the new topicals. But if just my private things like emotions and families crisis I will talk with my best friends.
Examiner
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidate
Yes, uh, for me, I like face to face because I think face to face can express is the human real emotion and can speak the situation carefully and easy to solve the problem rather than uh, the using social media can just is a virtual environment is not real.
Examiner
Do you argue with friends?
Candidate
Yes, of course argue isn't is a often occasion and because I talk about the topic, we have the different opinions. We often use arguments to justify the values and get the get the common topical.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不清晰,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并且注意时态和单复数的正确使用。可以多用连接词使句子更连贯。
Example: Yes, I like chatting with my best friend Jackson. We often share our opinions and help each other when facing difficult situations. He is very talented and always gives me valuable advice to solve problems.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答中表达不够清晰,词汇使用不准确,建议用更简单明了的句子表达观点,并且避免重复和语法错误。
Example: I usually chat with my friends about new ideas and knowledge. Talking with others helps me learn more because one person's thinking is limited, but a group can create many creative ideas.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答内容较好,但有语法和词汇错误,建议注意单复数和词汇拼写,句子结构可以更自然流畅。
Example: It depends on the situation. For group assignments, I chat with 3 or 4 people to discuss new topics. But for personal matters like emotions or family issues, I prefer talking with my best friend.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅,建议简化句子,使用正确的时态和词汇,使表达更自然。
Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to express real emotions and understand the situation better. It is easier to solve problems this way than through social media, which feels less real.
Do you argue with friends?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答语法错误较多,表达不清晰,建议用简单句表达观点,避免重复,注意词汇搭配。
Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. We use arguments to explain our views and try to reach an agreement.
× I like chatting with my best friends and he he's called Jackson, you know, I like share a lot of my opinions and we lose my facing the difficult situation.
✓ I like chatting with my best friend, and he's called Jackson. You know, I like to share a lot of my opinions, and he helps me when I face difficult situations.
这里“he he's”重复且用法错误,应为“he's”。“my best friends”应为单数“my best friend”,因为后文指的是一个人。动词“like share”缺少不定式“to”,应为“like to share”。“we lose my facing the difficult situation”语法混乱,正确表达应为“he helps me when I face difficult situations”。
× He always give me a violating of advice to help me solve the situation.
✓ He always gives me valuable advice to help me solve the situation.
“give”应为第三人称单数形式“gives”,因为主语是“he”。“a violating of advice”表达错误,应为“valuable advice”。
× I usually chat with my friends because I think chat chat something each other can explore a lot of new knowledgeable, you know a single brainer thinking just limited.
✓ I usually chat with my friends because I think chatting with each other can help us explore a lot of new knowledge. You know, single-brain thinking is just limited.
“chat chat something each other”表达不正确,应为“chatting with each other”。“new knowledgeable”应为“new knowledge”。“a single brainer thinking just limited”语序和表达错误,应为“single-brain thinking is just limited”。
× If finish a group assignments I need to chat with my group members like 34 peoples to get the new topicals.
✓ If I finish group assignments, I need to chat with my group members, like 3 or 4 people, to get new topics.
“a group assignments”中“assignments”是复数,前面不应加不定冠词“a”。“34 peoples”应为“3 or 4 people”,且“people”本身是复数形式。 “new topicals”应为“new topics”。
× If just my private things like emotions and families crisis I will talk with my best friends.
✓ If it's just my private things like emotions and family crises, I will talk with my best friend.
“families crisis”应为“family crises”,且“best friends”应为单数“best friend”,因为指一个人。
× I like face to face because I think face to face can express is the human real emotion and can speak the situation carefully and easy to solve the problem rather than uh, the using social media can just is a virtual environment is not real.
✓ I like face-to-face communication because I think it can express real human emotions, allow careful discussion of situations, and make it easier to solve problems, rather than using social media, which is just a virtual environment and not real.
“face to face”应为“face-to-face”作为形容词使用。句子结构混乱,需调整使表达更清晰。
× Yes, of course argue isn't is a often occasion and because I talk about the topic, we have the different opinions.
✓ Yes, of course, arguing is a common occurrence because when I talk about topics, we have different opinions.
“argue isn't is a often occasion”语法错误,应为“arguing is a common occurrence”。“the different opinions”中“the”不必要,应为“different opinions”。
× We often use arguments to justify the values and get the get the common topical.
✓ We often use arguments to justify our views and reach a common understanding on the topic.
“justify the values”表达不准确,应为“justify our views”。“get the get the common topical”重复且用词错误,应为“reach a common understanding on the topic”。