Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như thiếu sự mạch lạc trong câu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và nói lắp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends, especially on weekends when I have more free time. It helps me relax after intensive lessons and catch up on their lives. For example, we often share stories and talk about our experiences, which makes me feel connected.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý hợp lý hơn. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm phong phú nội dung.

Example: Honestly, we often joke about our daily lives, such as what happened at work or school. We also like to share stories about our hobbies and future plans. Talking about these things helps us stay connected and understand each other better.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lỗi sai như 'mold up' và 'it's make me'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên kết giữa các câu để tăng tính logic.

Example: Honestly, I often feel overwhelmed in a group because of interruptions. That's why I prefer chatting with a best friend, as it makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed. For example, when I talk to one person, I can focus better and share my thoughts more clearly.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lỗi như 'it's allowed to see the other person face' hay 'attracting on social media'. Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Honestly, I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see the other person's facial expressions and body language. This helps me understand their feelings more clearly. For example, when talking in person, I can easily share my emotions and build a stronger connection compared to communicating on social media.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ và nói lắp. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên kết giữa các câu. Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.

Example: Honestly, I believe every relationship, including friendship, sometimes involves disagreements. I occasionally have conflicts with my friends, especially when we have different opinions. However, these arguments help us understand each other better.

× Yes, definitely I really enjoyed chatting with my friends ESM, especially on weekend, uh, when I have more free time.

✓ Yes, definitely I really enjoy chatting with my friends ESM, especially on weekends, uh, when I have more free time.

The sentence uses 'enjoyed' which is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'enjoy' is appropriate. Also, 'on weekend' should be plural 'on weekends' to indicate regular occurrence.

× especially on weekend, uh, when I have more free time.

✓ especially on weekends, uh, when I have more free time.

The preposition 'on' is correct, but 'weekend' should be plural 'weekends' to indicate repeated events happening regularly.

× It's helped me and while after intensive lesson and catch up on what's going on in their life live and for example, we often share story and talk about our experiences, which make me feel.

✓ It helps me to relax after intensive lessons and catch up on what's going on in their lives. For example, we often share stories and talk about our experiences, which makes me feel good.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correct sentence structure and verb agreement are needed. 'It's helped' should be 'It helps' for habitual action. 'Lesson' should be plural 'lessons'. 'Life live' is incorrect; 'lives' is correct plural. 'Share story' should be 'share stories'. 'Which make me feel' should be 'which makes me feel' to agree with singular 'which'.

× As we honestly we often joked about our daily life was such as what happened at work or school.

✓ Honestly, we often joke about our daily lives, such as what happens at work or school.

'Joked' is past tense but context suggests habitual action, so 'joke' is correct. 'Daily life' should be plural 'daily lives' to refer to multiple people. 'Was such as' is incorrect; 'such as' is sufficient.

× We also like to share a story about our hobby and a plan in the future.

✓ We also like to share stories about our hobbies and plans for the future.

'A story' should be plural 'stories' to match 'our hobbies and plans'. 'A plan in the future' should be 'plans for the future' for correct preposition and plural form.

× Talking this thing help us stay connected, understand each other better.

✓ Talking about these things helps us stay connected and understand each other better.

'Talking this thing' is incorrect; it should be 'Talking about these things'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular gerund subject.

× Honestly, I'm mold up and interrupt so I often feel overwhelmed when I'm in a group of people.

✓ Honestly, I'm shy and tend to interrupt, so I often feel overwhelmed when I'm in a group of people.

'I'm mold up' is incorrect; likely intended 'I'm shy' or 'I'm held back'. 'Tend to interrupt' is clearer. Modal verb usage is not directly involved but expression needed correction.

× That's why I prefer chatting with a best friend because it's make me feel more comfortable and relax.

✓ That's why I prefer chatting with a best friend because it makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed.

'It's make' should be 'it makes' to agree with third person singular subject. 'Relax' should be 'relaxed' as an adjective describing the feeling.

× For example, I when I talk to one person I can focus better on the conversation and share my thoughts more clearly.

✓ For example, when I talk to one person, I can focus better on the conversation and share my thoughts more clearly.

The phrase 'I when I' is incorrect; 'I' should be removed. Commas are added for clarity.

× Honestly I prefer face to face communication because it's allowed to see the other person face, so expression and body language would help her to feel they're feeling more clearly.

✓ Honestly, I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see the other person's face, so expressions and body language help me understand their feelings more clearly.

'It's allowed' should be 'it allows'. 'The other person face' should be 'the other person's face'. 'Help her to feel they're feeling' is incorrect; corrected to 'help me understand their feelings' for clarity and correct pronouns.

× For example, when talking in person, I can easily share my emotion and be a stronger connection compared to attracting on social media.

✓ For example, when talking in person, I can easily share my emotions and have a stronger connection compared to interacting on social media.

'Share my emotion' should be plural 'emotions'. 'Be a stronger connection' is incorrect; 'have a stronger connection' is correct. 'Attracting' is incorrect; 'interacting' fits the context.

× Honestly, I believe every every relationship including friendship I had umm sometime involve disagreement and I sometime has conflict with my friends especially when we have different opinion about something.

✓ Honestly, I believe every relationship, including friendship, sometimes involves disagreement and I sometimes have conflicts with my friends, especially when we have different opinions about something.

'I had' should be 'I have' for present belief. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Involve' should be 'involves' to agree with singular subject. 'Has' should be 'have' to agree with 'I'. 'Conflict' should be plural 'conflicts'. 'Opinion' should be plural 'opinions'.

× However, this argument help us understand each other.

✓ However, this argument helps us understand each other.

'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'argument'.