Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response, avoid redundancy, and use correct sentence structures. Also, explain your reasons with linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Sometimes I like chatting with friends, but I usually prefer face-to-face conversations because I find it easier to express myself clearly. Moreover, chatting online can sometimes lead to misunderstandings, so I avoid it when possible.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but needs clearer structure and smoother linking. Avoid filler words and be more specific about the topics you discuss.

Example: I usually chat with my friends about our daily experiences and feelings. For example, we share updates about new events in our lives and how we are feeling emotionally.

Suggestion: Your answer has many hesitations and unclear expressions. Try to speak more fluently and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in a group conversation, I often get confused by many different opinions. Therefore, one-on-one chats are easier for me to follow and enjoy.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Use correct tenses and complete your thoughts for clarity.

Example: A year ago, I preferred communicating via social media, but now I prefer face-to-face conversations because I can better express my feelings and see the other person's reactions.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and full of hesitations. Try to give a direct and complete response with reasons. Avoid filler words and organize your ideas logically.

Example: I usually dislike arguing with friends, but sometimes it is necessary to express different opinions. However, I try to keep arguments calm and not let them become serious.

× Sometimes I do, but mostly I prefer a season to face to face because I don't.

✓ Sometimes I do, but mostly I prefer season to face-to-face because I don't.

The phrase 'a season to face to face' is incorrect. It seems the student meant 'season' without the article 'a' and 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear, but focusing on the preposition and article usage, removing 'a' before 'season' is correct.

× Usually I don't have time to chat and I can't express myself really well.

✓ Usually, I don't have time to chat, and I can't express myself really well.

Although this sentence is mostly correct, adding commas improves clarity. No major grammar problem from the list applies here, so no correction needed based on the instructions.

× Also with chatting people can get you your opinion in different ways so I prefer not to.

✓ Also, with chatting, people can get your opinion in different ways, so I prefer not to.

The phrase 'get you your opinion' is incorrect; it should be 'get your opinion'. Also, commas are needed for clarity. The preposition 'with' is correctly used here, but the pronoun usage is incorrect (see next).

× Also with chatting people can get you your opinion in different ways so I prefer not to.

✓ Also, with chatting, people can get your opinion in different ways, so I prefer not to.

The phrase 'get you your opinion' is incorrect because 'you' is unnecessary and confusing. The correct phrase is 'get your opinion'. Removing 'you' corrects the pronoun misuse.

× I usually chat about with them on about my day and I also ask them about their.

✓ I usually chat with them about my day, and I also ask them about theirs.

The phrase 'chat about with them on about' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'chat with someone about something'. Also, 'their' should be 'theirs' to refer to 'their day' implicitly. This corrects preposition and pronoun usage.

× I usually chat about with them on about my day and I also ask them about their.

✓ I usually chat with them about my day, and I also ask them about theirs.

The pronoun 'their' is incomplete here; it should be 'theirs' to stand for 'their day'. This corrects the pronoun usage.

× So we are talking about our feelings or uh, some new things in our lives.

✓ So we talk about our feelings or some new things in our lives.

The sentence is mostly correct, but 'are talking' can be simplified to 'talk' for habitual action. No major grammar problem from the list applies here, so no correction needed based on the instructions.

× I was preferred to chat with only one friend, uh, group, uh, in a group of people, uh, I always, uh, I'm always getting lost and uh, uh, I hate, I hate uh, umm, to read a lot of different people's sentences and opinions.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend. In a group of people, I always get lost, and I hate reading a lot of different people's sentences and opinions.

'I was preferred' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I prefer' for present preference. Also, 'I'm always getting lost' is better as 'I always get lost' for habitual action. 'I hate to read' is better as 'I hate reading' to express dislike of the activity. These correct past tense and verb form issues.

× One year ago, I provided preferred to communicate via social media, but nowadays I prefer to talk in person because I like to express my feelings and I want to see.

✓ One year ago, I preferred to communicate via social media, but nowadays I prefer to talk in person because I like to express my feelings and I want to see.

'Provided preferred' is incorrect; the correct past tense form is 'preferred'. This corrects the past tense issue.

× One year ago, I provided preferred to communicate via social media, but nowadays I prefer to talk in person because I like to express my feelings and I want to see.

✓ One year ago, I preferred to communicate via social media, but nowadays I prefer to talk in person because I like to express my feelings and want to see them.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'I want to see.' It should specify what is to be seen, e.g., 'them' referring to feelings or expressions. This corrects sentence structure errors.

× I hate talking, but sometimes, I don't know, it is really, really umm, but sometimes it's necessary.

✓ I hate arguing, but sometimes, I don't know, it is really necessary.

The student says 'I hate talking' in response to 'Do you argue with friends?'. The correct verb is 'arguing'. Also, the sentence is repetitive and unclear; simplifying improves clarity. No preposition error here, but verb choice is corrected.

× We umm, it's not really uh, important, uh, argue also.

✓ We, umm, it's not really important to argue, either.

The phrase 'important, uh, argue also' is incorrect. It should be 'important to argue, either' to express the idea properly. This corrects preposition and sentence structure errors.