Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, explain why you prefer calling over chatting with specific reasons.

Example: I sometimes like chatting with friends, but I prefer calling them because chatting can waste a lot of time. Calling is more direct and helps us communicate better.

Suggestion: Your answer has many fillers and is unclear. Try to speak more fluently and provide specific details about the topics you discuss. Use linking words to organize your answer.

Example: Usually, I chat with my friends about my daily routine and sometimes I ask them questions or doubts related to my project to get their advice.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Avoid fillers and repetition. Give a clear reason why you prefer chatting with one friend and explain it with specific details.

Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I find it easier to focus on their advice without getting confused by many opinions.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by adding linking words and more specific details to make it more natural and effective.

Example: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to read the person's facial expressions and understand their feelings better, which is difficult through social media.

Suggestion: Your answer is short and has grammatical errors. Try to give a complete sentence with linking words and explain why you argue with friends.

Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because when I disagree with their opinions, I like to debate and share my point of view.

× Sometimes I like chatting with friends because of intent.

✓ Sometimes I like chatting with friends with intent.

The phrase 'because of intent' is incorrect here. The preposition 'because of' is used to indicate a reason, but 'intent' needs a preposition 'with' to show purpose. So, 'with intent' is correct.

× They have a lot of wasting of time.

✓ They waste a lot of time.

The phrase 'a lot of wasting of time' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'waste a lot of time' where 'waste' is a verb and 'a lot of time' is the object.

× So rather than chatting I used to call with my friends.

✓ So rather than chatting, I used to call my friends.

The phrase 'call with my friends' is incorrect; 'call' is a transitive verb and does not require 'with'. Also, a comma is needed after 'chatting' for clarity.

× Usually when we chat about my daily routine or uh, uh, whatever, uh, uh, I have a question, uh, or a doubt in uh, my project, then I'll uh, ask to my side.

✓ Usually when we chat about my daily routine or whatever, if I have a question or a doubt about my project, then I'll ask my side.

The phrase 'ask to my side' is incorrect; 'ask' does not require 'to' before the object. Also, 'doubt in my project' should be 'doubt about my project'.

× So if 111 of my friend gave me uh, those suggestions, then I'll accept it and I do not want to mix it up.

✓ So if 111 of my friends gave me those suggestions, then I'll accept them and I do not want to mix them up.

'111 of my friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to multiple people. Also, 'those suggestions' is plural, so the pronouns should be 'them' instead of 'it'.

× Yes, I prefer to communicate face to face because when you are face to face then you can read the person's face and you can feel whatever they want to tell you.

✓ Yes, I prefer to communicate face-to-face because when you are face-to-face, you can read the person's face and understand what they want to tell you.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb or adjective. Also, 'feel whatever they want to tell you' is better expressed as 'understand what they want to tell you'.

× Yes, I argue with my friends because if I am not agree with that point, so I debate on that.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friends because if I do not agree with that point, I debate on it.

The phrase 'I am not agree' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I do not agree'. Also, 'debate on that' is better as 'debate on it' for pronoun consistency.