Part 1
Examiner
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidate
And yes I like to chatting with my friend and we usually chatting over Co over coffee or meals and it's usually helps us to catch up and sing our stories and it helps us to release our pressure and have a better relationship.
Examiner
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidate
Were you usually chatting about our daily lives like uh, our study and our, our meal, what we eat and something interesting like some interesting people or like some, uh, video video games or some sports?
Examiner
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidate
So I for me, I prefer to chatting with Wong only one friend and a little group of people is a lot of, but sometimes when we are chatting, we usually to talk about something special and the group of people, maybe they don't, they can't understand the, uh, the things I impress. So I like to play with.
Examiner
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidate
So I prefer to choose face to face when we talking face to face, I can uh, get the meaning behind his words through his emotional emotions and through his face. But through the videos, umm, I can't understand what it really mean, he say.
Examiner
Do you argue with friends?
Candidate
So for us, sometimes we argue about normally it's a small thing like when we usually have a fight on our video when we are playing video games, but in other times, usually we don't have argued.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误,如动词形式错误和重复表达,建议注意动词时态和单复数形式,避免冗余。
Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We usually meet over coffee or meals, which helps us catch up and share our stories. It also helps us relieve stress and strengthen our relationships.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇,建议使用更准确的表达,并且避免重复。
Example: We usually chat about our daily lives, such as our studies, meals, interesting people, video games, and sports.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答表达不清晰,语法错误较多,建议简化句子结构,明确表达观点。
Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in a group, people might not understand the special topics I want to discuss.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中有重复和语法错误,建议使用更简洁的句子,并注意动词时态和单复数。
Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can understand emotions and facial expressions better than through videos.
Do you argue with friends?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够流畅,建议注意动词形式和句子结构。
Example: Sometimes we argue about small things, like when we play video games. However, most of the time, we get along well.
× And yes I like to chatting with my friend and we usually chatting over Co over coffee or meals and it's usually helps us to catch up and sing our stories and it helps us to release our pressure and have a better relationship.
✓ And yes, I like chatting with my friends and we usually chat over coffee or meals. It usually helps us catch up and share our stories, and it helps us release our pressure and have a better relationship.
动词后面接动名词时,不能用不定式to加动词ing形式。这里“like to chatting”应改为“like chatting”。另外,动词时态和主谓一致也需调整。
× Were you usually chatting about our daily lives like uh, our study and our, our meal, what we eat and something interesting like some interesting people or like some, uh, video video games or some sports?
✓ We usually chat about our daily lives, like our studies, our meals, what we eat, and something interesting like some interesting people, video games, or sports.
“Were you usually chatting”时态和语态不符合语境,应使用一般现在时“we usually chat”。
× So I for me, I prefer to chatting with Wong only one friend and a little group of people is a lot of, but sometimes when we are chatting, we usually to talk about something special and the group of people, maybe they don't, they can't understand the, uh, the things I impress. So I like to play with.
✓ So for me, I prefer chatting with only one friend. A small group of people is a lot, but sometimes when we are chatting, we usually talk about something special, and the group of people maybe can't understand the things I express. So I like to play with one friend.
“prefer to chatting”错误,动词prefer后面接动名词或不定式,这里应为“prefer chatting”。另外,句子结构混乱,需调整。
× So I prefer to choose face to face when we talking face to face, I can uh, get the meaning behind his words through his emotional emotions and through his face.
✓ So I prefer face-to-face communication. When we talk face to face, I can get the meaning behind his words through his emotions and facial expressions.
“prefer to choose face to face”表达不自然,应简化为“prefer face-to-face communication”。“when we talking”缺少助动词,应为“when we talk”。
× But through the videos, umm, I can't understand what it really mean, he say.
✓ But through videos, I can't understand what he really means.
“mean”应为第三人称单数形式“means”,“he say”应为“he says”,保持时态和主谓一致。
× So for us, sometimes we argue about normally it's a small thing like when we usually have a fight on our video when we are playing video games, but in other times, usually we don't have argued.
✓ So for us, sometimes we argue about small things, like when we usually have a fight during video games, but other times, we usually don't argue.
“don't have argued”错误,动词时态不正确,应为“don't argue”。另外,句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。