Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and unclear phrases. Use clear linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar mistakes. For example, instead of 'I just do chatting with my friends for a time bus', say 'I usually chat with my friends to pass the time'.

Example: Yes, I love chatting with my friends. Usually, when I'm at home and my friend is free, we chat about how our day is going. Sometimes, she shares personal stories with me.

Suggestion: Focus on making your sentences clearer and more grammatically correct. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to connect ideas. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily and be specific about the topics you discuss.

Example: It depends on the occasion. For example, if I attended a party, I usually talk about the party and the new friends I made there. Also, if I went to a college event, I discuss what happened at that event.

Suggestion: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to explain your preferences logically. Keep your sentences concise and focused.

Example: I prefer chatting with a group of people because there are more topics to discuss. Also, everyone shares their daily experiences, which makes the conversation more interesting.

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent by reducing hesitation and filler words. Use clear linking words like 'however' to contrast your preferences. Also, complete your sentences fully for clarity.

Example: It's a difficult question because I like both face-to-face and social media communication. However, I usually prefer face-to-face because social media sometimes has network issues, and in person, I can share everything more easily.

Suggestion: Improve your grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'however' and 'sometimes' to show contrast. Be specific about how you handle disagreements with friends.

Example: It depends on the topic. If my friend is wrong, I might argue to correct her. However, sometimes I am wrong too, and my friend helps me understand my mistakes.

× I just do chatting with my friends for a time bus and my friend is also free at that time so we just chat about our our day like how's our day is going on.

✓ I just chat with my friends for a time bus and my friend is also free at that time so we just chat about our day, like how our day is going.

The phrase 'do chatting' is incorrect because 'do' is not used with the gerund form 'chatting' in this context. Instead, the simple present 'chat' should be used. Also, 'how's our day is going on' is redundant; it should be 'how our day is going.' Suggestion: Use the simple present tense 'chat' instead of 'do chatting' and simplify the phrase to 'how our day is going.'

× Sometimes my friend tell us about uh some personal thing about her.

✓ Sometimes my friend tells us about some personal things about her.

The subject 'my friend' is singular, so the verb should be 'tells' (third person singular). Also, 'tell us' is correct but 'us' is plural, which is acceptable if the speaker includes themselves and others. The phrase 'some personal thing' should be pluralized to 'some personal things' for naturalness. Suggestion: Use 'tells' for singular subject and pluralize 'thing' to 'things.'

× If I had a party or something before chatting then I I'd definitely chat with my friend about that party, about the friend friends I made in that party.

✓ If I had a party or something before chatting, then I'd definitely chat with my friend about that party, about the friends I made at that party.

The phrase 'friend friends' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'friends.' Also, 'in that party' is better expressed as 'at that party.' Suggestion: Remove repeated word and use correct preposition 'at' for events.

× Or if I went to a college or some event or something then I definitely talk about that event or part that college.

✓ Or if I went to a college or some event or something, then I definitely talk about that event or part of that college.

The phrase 'part that college' is missing the preposition 'of.' It should be 'part of that college.' Suggestion: Add the preposition 'of' to complete the phrase.

× Well I would like to chat with my group of people because if I chat with my only one friend then I don't have much of it to talk with her.

✓ Well, I would like to chat with my group of people because if I chat with only one friend, then I don't have much to talk about with her.

The phrase 'my only one friend' is awkward; 'only one friend' is better. Also, 'much of it to talk' is incorrect; it should be 'much to talk about.' Suggestion: Simplify to 'only one friend' and use 'much to talk about.'

× Or if I talk with if I chat with a group of people they also shared their thoughts on their day-to-day life experience so they have got a got a topic also.

✓ Or if I chat with a group of people, they also share their thoughts on their day-to-day life experiences, so we have a topic to talk about as well.

The sentence has tense inconsistency: 'they also shared' should be 'they also share' to match present tense. Also, 'have got a got a topic' is repetitive and awkward; 'have a topic to talk about' is better. Suggestion: Use present tense 'share' and simplify the phrase to 'have a topic to talk about.'

× I like to communicate with face to face or via social media both of the way.

✓ I like to communicate face to face or via social media, both ways.

The phrase 'communicate with face to face' is incorrect; 'communicate face to face' is correct. Also, 'both of the way' should be 'both ways.' Suggestion: Remove 'with' and use 'both ways.'

× But usually I prefer to communicate by face to face because on social media, uh, sometimes I, I face issue about networking and all, but if I communicate face to face, I can share everything without any.

✓ But usually I prefer to communicate face to face because on social media, sometimes I face issues with networking and all, but if I communicate face to face, I can share everything without any problem.

The phrase 'communicate by face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'communicate face to face.' Also, 'face issue about networking' should be 'face issues with networking.' The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'problem' completes the thought. Suggestion: Use 'communicate face to face' and 'face issues with networking.'

× If my friend wrong in a top wrong in a topic then I will definitely argue with her and I will correct her about the mistake and all.

✓ If my friend is wrong in a topic, then I will definitely argue with her and correct her about the mistake and all.

The phrase 'If my friend wrong' is missing the verb 'is.' Also, 'top wrong in a topic' seems to be a typo; corrected to 'is wrong in a topic.' Suggestion: Add the verb 'is' to form correct present tense conditional.

× Sometimes I was also wrong. I also wronged about arguing so whenever I was I am wrong my friend also taught me about that.

✓ Sometimes I am also wrong. I was also wrong about arguing, so whenever I am wrong, my friend also teaches me about that.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'I was also wrong' should be 'I am also wrong' to match the present context. 'I also wronged about arguing' is incorrect; 'I was also wrong about arguing' is better. 'Whenever I was I am wrong' is confusing; corrected to 'whenever I am wrong.' 'Taught' should be 'teaches' to match present tense. Suggestion: Use consistent present tense for habitual actions and correct verb forms.