Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現を避けるために、より簡潔で正確な表現を心がけましょう。例えば、"Absolutely yes I do"は"Yes, I absolutely do"の方が自然です。

Example: Yes, I absolutely do because chatting with friends helps me relax and I enjoy sharing opinions with them.

Suggestion: 文が途中で終わっているため、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して完全な文で答え、具体的な詳細を加えることが重要です。

Example: I usually chat about our boyfriends and ask my friends for advice when I have problems in my relationship.

Suggestion: 文法の誤り（"only one friends"は"only one friend"）や曖昧な表現（"Umm"）を避け、理由を明確に述べるようにしましょう。

Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend rather than a group because we can have deeper and more meaningful conversations.

Suggestion: 冗長な表現や文法の誤りを避け、理由を簡潔かつ明確に述べることが大切です。

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can understand their feelings better through facial expressions and tone of voice.

Suggestion: 文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いので、正しい文法を使い、意味が明確になるようにしましょう。

Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions, but we usually discuss and resolve our conflicts peacefully.

× Absolutely yes I do. That's because chatting with friends makes me relax and sharing our opinion is interesting for me.

✓ Absolutely yes I do. That's because chatting with friends makes me relax and sharing our opinions is interesting to me.

The phrase 'sharing our opinion is interesting for me' should be 'sharing our opinions is interesting to me' because 'interesting' is typically followed by 'to' when indicating who finds something interesting. Also, 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions' to match the context of multiple opinions being shared.

× I usually chat about our boyfriends with my friends. I ask I ask them for advice to solve the problem of.

✓ I usually chat about our boyfriends with my friends. I ask them for advice to solve the problem.

The sentence contains a repeated phrase 'I ask I ask' which is a redundancy error. Also, the phrase 'to solve the problem of' is incomplete and should be 'to solve the problem.' The verb 'ask' is correctly in present tense matching 'usually chat'.

× I prefer to chat with only one friends than with many people.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend than with many people.

The phrase 'one friends' is incorrect because 'one' requires a singular noun. Therefore, 'friends' should be changed to 'friend' to agree in number.

× I prefer to communicate face to face rather than such via social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media.

The phrase 'rather than such via social media' is incorrect. The word 'such' is unnecessary and should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× That's because we can know their feeling because through their face and the tone rather than social media.

✓ That's because we can know their feelings through their face and tone rather than through social media.

The word 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context. Also, the phrase 'because through their face and the tone' is awkward; 'because' is redundant here and 'the tone' should be 'tone'. The preposition 'through' should be used before 'social media' for parallel structure.

× Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when I'm conflict.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when I'm in conflict.

The phrase 'when I'm conflict' is incorrect because 'conflict' is a noun and requires the preposition 'in' to form the phrase 'in conflict'.

× When we conflict with different opinion, however, we discuss a lot and finally I overcome with them.

✓ When we have conflicts with different opinions, however, we discuss a lot and finally I overcome them.

The phrase 'conflict with different opinion' should be 'have conflicts with different opinions' to use the correct verb and plural noun. Also, 'overcome with them' is incorrect; it should be 'overcome them' without 'with'.