Part 1
Examiner
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidate
Yes definitely Chinese help me relax and sharing my feelings so I really enjoy it.
Examiner
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidate
Sometimes I chat with friends about school in trading topic or TV program.
Examiner
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidate
I prefer chat with only one friend because it can more focused with my conversation and easier share personal and.
Examiner
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidate
To be honest, I prefer face to face is better because I can see their experience, expressions and more focused. But social media is convenient when we far away.
Examiner
Do you argue with friends?
Candidate
Sometimes, yes, we may argue about small things like way to eat. But we make up quickly.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多,建议使用完整句子并避免语法错误,同时表达更清晰。
Example: Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my feelings.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答内容不够具体,且表达不够连贯,建议明确主题并使用连接词。
Example: Sometimes, I chat with my friends about school, trading topics, or TV programs.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 句子结构不完整,表达不清晰,建议使用完整句子并说明原因。
Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows me to focus more on the conversation and share personal thoughts easily.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 表达有些重复且语法错误,建议简洁表达并注意语法准确。
Example: To be honest, I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see their expressions and focus better. However, social media is convenient when we are far apart.
Do you argue with friends?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答较简短,建议增加细节并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Example: Sometimes, yes, we argue about small things like the way we eat, but we always make up quickly because our friendship is important.
× Yes definitely Chinese help me relax and sharing my feelings so I really enjoy it.
✓ Yes, definitely Chinese helps me relax and share my feelings, so I really enjoy it.
主语Chinese是单数,谓语动词help应使用第三人称单数形式helps;sharing应改为动词原形share以保持并列结构一致。
× Sometimes I chat with friends about school in trading topic or TV program.
✓ Sometimes I chat with friends about school, trading topics, or TV programs.
介词in使用不当,应去掉;topic应为复数topics;TV program应为复数programs,表示多个话题。
× I prefer chat with only one friend because it can more focused with my conversation and easier share personal and.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because it can be more focused on my conversation and easier to share personal things.
动词prefer后应加to不定式;more focused后应加介词on;easier后应加to不定式;personal后应补充名词things。
× To be honest, I prefer face to face is better because I can see their experience, expressions and more focused. But social media is convenient when we far away.
✓ To be honest, I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see their expressions and be more focused. But social media is convenient when we are far away.
face to face应连写为face-to-face作形容词;experience用词不当,应为expressions;more focused前应加be动词;we far away缺少be动词are。
× Sometimes, yes, we may argue about small things like way to eat. But we make up quickly.
✓ Sometimes, yes, we may argue about small things like the way to eat. But we make up quickly.
way前应加定冠词the,表示特指。