Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。より自然で効果的な英語にするために、理由を明確にし、簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

Example: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it helps me feel supported and improves my mental health.

Suggestion: 内容は理解できますが、繰り返しや不自然な表現が多いです。話題を具体的にし、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。

Example: I usually chat about the weather and the projects I'm working on at the office when I meet my friends.

Suggestion: 回答が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I find it easier to focus and have a meaningful conversation.

Suggestion: 理由は伝わりますが、文法や表現が不自然です。より自然な表現で理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because seeing my friends' expressions helps me understand their feelings better.

Suggestion: 内容が少し混乱しており、文法の誤りもあります。質問に対して明確に答え、具体的な例を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

Example: I usually avoid arguments with my friends, but sometimes when I am drunk, we discuss controversial topics like environmental and nuclear issues.

× Yes, I like because chatting with friends makes me strong and I can feel that I have some friends to connect with me.

✓ Yes, I like it because chatting with friends makes me strong and I can feel that I have some friends to connect with me.

The sentence is missing the object 'it' after 'I like'. The verb 'like' requires an object to complete its meaning. Adding 'it' corrects the sentence structure.

× Usually I meet my friends in my office, so I I often talk with my friends about that work which I currently working on.

✓ Usually I meet my friends in my office, so I often talk with my friends about the work which I am currently working on.

The phrase 'I currently working on' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. The correct form is 'I am currently working on'.

× I prefer to talk with only one friend because if I am in the situation that there are many people I'm. I'm very confused that first I needed to talk to and so on. So and the.

✓ I prefer to talk with only one friend because if I am in a situation with many people, I get very confused about whom to talk to first.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness, including proper conjunctions and sentence completion.

× I prefer to talk face to face because I I cannot feel to connect someone by using social media and I can if I can see the face of my friends, I can feel directly what they think and so on.

✓ I prefer to talk face to face because I cannot feel connected to someone by using social media, and if I can see the face of my friends, I can directly feel what they think and so on.

The phrase 'feel to connect someone' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'feel connected to someone'. Also, 'feel directly what they think' is better expressed as 'directly feel what they think' for natural word order.

× However, if I I got drunk, I was arguing with my friends about the controversial issues such as and environmental issue and nuclear issue.

✓ However, if I got drunk, I argued with my friends about controversial issues such as environmental issues and nuclear issues.

The past continuous 'was arguing' is less appropriate here; simple past 'argued' fits better. Also, 'such as and environmental issue and nuclear issue' is incorrect; it should be 'such as environmental issues and nuclear issues' for correct plural and conjunction usage.