Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: तपाईंको उत्तरमा केही व्याकरणिक त्रुटिहरू छन् र वाक्यहरू अलि लामो र दोहोरिएका छन्। कृपया छोटो, स्पष्ट र प्राकृतिक वाक्यहरू प्रयोग गर्नुहोस्। साथै, 'can't hear everyday information' को सट्टा 'can hear everyday information' भन्नु उपयुक्त हुन्छ।

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay updated with daily news. I also get new ideas and advice from them. Moreover, I can reply whenever I am free, which makes chatting very convenient.

Suggestion: तपाईंको उत्तरमा धेरै 'uh' र 'umm' जस्ता filler शब्दहरू छन् जुन प्राकृतिकता कम गर्छ। कृपया स्पष्ट र सुसंगत वाक्यहरू प्रयोग गर्नुहोस् र विषयवस्तु स्पष्ट राख्नुहोस्।

Example: It depends on my day. If I have traveled or visited new places, I usually talk about those experiences. On casual days, we have normal conversations about everyday topics.

Suggestion: तपाईंको उत्तरमा केही व्याकरणिक त्रुटिहरू छन् र वाक्यहरू अलि लामो छन्। 'a introvert' को सट्टा 'an introvert' प्रयोग गर्नुहोस्। साथै, 'peoples' को सट्टा 'people' प्रयोग गर्नुहोस्। वाक्यहरूलाई छोटो र स्पष्ट बनाउन प्रयास गर्नुहोस्।

Example: I am an introvert, so I prefer chatting with one close friend rather than a group. I feel more comfortable sharing my daily activities with someone I trust.

Suggestion: तपाईंको उत्तरमा केही वाक्यहरू अस्पष्ट छन् र अन्त्यमा वाक्य अधुरो छ। कृपया वाक्यहरूलाई पूर्ण र स्पष्ट बनाउनुहोस्। साथै, 'through face to face' को सट्टा 'face-to-face' प्रयोग गर्नुहोस्।

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it provides more clarity and allows us to express emotions better. Social media can have issues like poor internet connection, which makes communication difficult.

Suggestion: तपाईंको उत्तर राम्रो छ तर केही वाक्यहरू अलि लामो र जटिल छन्। कृपया वाक्यहरूलाई छोटो र स्पष्ट बनाउन प्रयास गर्नुहोस् र 'isn't that more serious' को सट्टा 'isn't serious enough' प्रयोग गर्नुहोस्।

Example: It depends. Sometimes during serious conversations, we might have small disagreements. However, I avoid fighting with my friends because they support me in daily life and difficult times.

× I can't hear everyday information with them.

✓ I can't hear everyday information from them.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate the source of information is 'from'. नेपालमा, 'with' को सट्टा 'from' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ जब स्रोत जनाउनुपर्छ।

× I can get some new ideas or some advice from them through the chatting well

✓ I can get some new ideas or some advice from them through chatting well

The article 'the' before 'chatting' is unnecessary because 'chatting' is used in a general sense here. नेपालमा, सामान्य अर्थमा क्रियापद अगाडि 'the' नलगाउने नियम छ।

× if I have spent my day like traveling or visiting new places, it will be on the new experience that I go to, umm, discover.

✓ if I have spent my day traveling or visiting new places, it will be about the new experiences that I go to, umm, discover.

The phrase 'the new experience' should be plural 'new experiences' to match the plural activities. Also, 'on' should be 'about' to correctly express the topic. नेपालमा, बहुवचन र उपयुक्त पूर्वसर्ग प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ।

× then we'll do the normal conversations like as usual.

✓ then we'll have normal conversations as usual.

The phrase 'like as usual' is incorrect; 'as usual' alone is sufficient. Also, 'do the normal conversations' should be 'have normal conversations'. नेपालमा, 'like as usual' को सट्टा 'as usual' प्रयोग गरिन्छ र 'do conversations' होइन 'have conversations' प्रयोग गरिन्छ।

× I don't like to umm, share my information or day-to-day activities with most of the peoples.

✓ I don't like to umm, share my information or day-to-day activities with most of the people.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect here; 'people' is the correct plural form for persons. नेपालमा, 'peoples' को सट्टा 'people' प्रयोग गरिन्छ जब मानिसहरूको समूह जनाउनुपर्छ।

× I only prefer to share with my closest friend.

✓ I prefer to share only with my closest friend.

The placement of 'only' is better before 'with' to clarify the meaning. नेपालमा, 'only' को सही स्थान वाक्यको अर्थ स्पष्ट पार्न महत्त्वपूर्ण हुन्छ।

× So I like to chat with one of my close friends rather than saying with the group of people who are not then that most important for me.

✓ So I like to chat with one of my close friends rather than staying with the group of people who are not that important to me.

The word 'saying' is incorrect; it should be 'staying'. Also, 'then' should be 'that', and 'for me' should be 'to me'. नेपालमा, शब्द चयन र पूर्वसर्गको सही प्रयोग आवश्यक छ।

× I prefer to communicate through face to face because it gives us some more clarity and it feels more convenient than through social media because sometimes it may arise some problems like Internet, lack of Internet connections.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it gives us more clarity and feels more convenient than through social media because sometimes problems like lack of Internet connection may arise.

The phrase 'through face to face' is incorrect; 'face to face' does not need 'through'. Also, 'some more clarity' should be 'more clarity'. The phrase 'Internet, lack of Internet connections' is awkward and corrected to 'lack of Internet connection'. नेपालमा, 'face to face' अगाडि 'through' नलगाउने नियम छ र वाक्य संरचना सुधार गर्नुपर्छ।

× We can express our emotions when we are very close to that portion, so.

✓ We can express our emotions when we are very close to that person, so.

The word 'portion' is incorrect; it should be 'person'. नेपालमा, शब्द चयनमा सावधानी अपनाउनुपर्छ।

× if we're having some serious conversation and someone isn't that more serious about it, then we may have a little discussions.

✓ if we're having some serious conversation and someone isn't that serious about it, then we may have a little discussion.

The phrase 'that more serious' is incorrect; it should be 'that serious'. Also, 'a little discussions' is incorrect; 'a little discussion' is correct. नेपालमा, 'that more serious' को सट्टा 'that serious' र 'a little discussions' को सट्टा 'a little discussion' प्रयोग गरिन्छ।