Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and includes irrelevant words like 'Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious' which do not contribute to the response. Try to give a clear, concise answer directly related to the question, avoiding redundancy and irrelevant words.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected, especially when we discuss our shared interests using computers or mobile phones.

Suggestion: Your answer has many hesitations and repetitions, and includes irrelevant words. Try to speak more fluently and provide specific details about the topics you discuss, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I usually chat about programming with my developer friend because we both enjoy discussing new technologies and solving coding problems together.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Please provide a direct response to the question and support it with reasons or examples. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because it allows me to hear different opinions and have more lively conversations.

Suggestion: Your answer contains many hesitations and lacks fluency. Try to organize your thoughts clearly and use linking words to compare your past and present preferences.

Example: When I was a child, I preferred face-to-face communication because it felt more personal; however, now I prefer using social media since it is more convenient and allows me to stay in touch with many people.

Suggestion: Your answer does not address the question about arguing with friends and includes irrelevant words. Make sure to answer the question directly and provide specific details or examples.

Example: I rarely argue with my friends because we understand each other well, but if we do, we try to resolve our disagreements calmly and quickly.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because I'm a professional programmer and sometimes I I talk with my friends with computers or mobiles.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because I'm a professional programmer and sometimes I talk with my friends using computers or mobiles.

The phrase 'talk with my friends with computers or mobiles' is awkward and unclear. The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used here. It should be 'using' to indicate the means of communication. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Uh, I usually talk about programming with my, uh, developer friend. Uh, because I have a developer friend and I and I am enjoy chatting with uh, just uh, friend with he and uh, yes.

✓ Uh, I usually talk about programming with my developer friend because I enjoy chatting with him, just a friend.

The sentence has redundant phrases and incorrect pronoun usage. 'Friend with he' is incorrect; it should be 'with him' as the object pronoun. Also, 'I am enjoy' is incorrect; it should be 'I enjoy'. The sentence is simplified for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually, I chat with the group and also people, the people and all of them my with all of them my with all of them my friends.

✓ Actually, I chat with groups of people, all of whom are my friends.

The original sentence is repetitive and lacks clear structure. 'All of them my with all of them my' is incorrect and confusing. The correction provides a clear, grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended meaning.

× Uh, in real life, uh, uh, in my opinion, I uh, when I was a little kids, I like to, uh, visit people, uh, face to face, but uh, I like to, uh, via social media right now.

✓ Uh, in real life, in my opinion, when I was a little kid, I liked to visit people face to face, but now I like to communicate via social media.

The phrase 'when I was a little kids' is incorrect; 'kids' is plural but 'I' is singular, so it should be 'kid'. Also, 'I like' should be in past tense 'I liked' to match the past time reference. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× I have two very good friends and what I spend my free time with them. It's very supercalifragilisticexpialidocious because we visit all of them shopping centers in Tehran.

✓ I have two very good friends with whom I spend my free time. It's very supercalifragilisticexpialidocious because we visit all the shopping centers in Tehran together.

The original sentence has incorrect structure: 'what I spend my free time with them' is ungrammatical. It should be 'with whom I spend my free time'. Also, 'all of them shopping centers' is incorrect; it should be 'all the shopping centers'. The correction improves sentence structure and clarity.