Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，避免重复和口语填充词。可以用更简洁自然的句子表达观点。

Example: Yes, I love chatting with friends because I am an extroverted person. Talking with them helps me feel happy and energized. I often share my experiences and challenges with them and also learn about their situations.

Suggestion: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用连贯的连接词，并具体说明聊天内容。

Example: I usually talk about recent events in my life because we meet less often as we grow older. For example, I might share news about a salary increase or other important changes.

Suggestion: 回答内容较好，但表达不够流畅，有语法和用词错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，避免重复，增强逻辑连贯性。

Example: It depends on the person's personality. I am extroverted, so I prefer chatting with a group of friends to share my news quickly. However, introverted people might prefer talking to just one close friend.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，句子不连贯。建议注意句子完整性，使用正确的词汇表达感受，并保持逻辑清晰。

Example: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because I can see facial expressions and body language, which makes me feel closer to the person. Online chats can be delayed and less personal.

Suggestion: 回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不完整，句子中断。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，清晰表达观点并举例说明。

Example: Sometimes I argue with friends because we have different opinions. However, I think arguing is a form of communication that helps us express our feelings and understand each other better.

× I need to chatting with friends to gain my energy in order to uh, make me feel happy.

✓ I need to chat with friends to gain my energy in order to, uh, make me feel happy.

动词不定式to后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式。这里应使用to chat而不是to chatting。

× so that I can knew what they are facing out and what I am facing now.

✓ so that I can know what they are facing and what I am facing now.

情态动词can后面应接动词原形，不能用过去式knew。应改为know。

× I usually check with them with what I happened recently cause after growing up, we will meet and we will meet, we will meet each other, uh, fewer and fewer times so that maybe the next time saw him or her is just like, uh, three months after.

✓ I usually check with them about what happened recently because after growing up, we will meet each other fewer and fewer times, so maybe the next time I see him or her is just like three months later.

动词check后应接介词about而非with；过去发生的事情用过去式happened；表达时间顺序应使用see him/her而非saw him/her，且时间状语应为three months later。

× I would say it depends on the person's personality. Cause for me, I am a kind of extroverted person. I like to check with many friends so that I can just only say say it one time and then I all my friends know my situation.

✓ I would say it depends on the person's personality. Because for me, I am a kind of extroverted person. I like to check with many friends so that I can just say it one time and then all my friends know my situation.

句中重复使用say say是错误，应去掉重复；I all my friends know my situation语序错误，应改为all my friends know my situation。

× However, Sam people, some person that might be introvert, they might like to talk with one friend 'cause they don't like to show, show.

✓ However, some people, some persons that might be introverted, they might like to talk with one friend because they don't like to show, show.

Sam应为some；person复数应为persons或people；introvert应为形容词introverted；because比cause更正式。

× I would say it is definitely face to face 'cause I can see their face, their express, their facial expression and I can see the boy, the language and it it made me feel more warm to new their feeling immediately because when we are chatting online, we we might not see and reply the message immediately so that when we are.

✓ I would say it is definitely face to face because I can see their face, their expression, their facial expression and I can see the body language and it makes me feel warmer to know their feelings immediately because when we are chatting online, we might not see and reply to the message immediately.

face to face前应加冠词the；express应为expression；the boy应为the body；made应为makes以符合现在时；to new应为to know；reply后应加介词to。

× I would say sometimes 'cause we might have different opinions in the same topic, but I would, I would not say that it is a bad thing.

✓ I would say sometimes because we might have different opinions on the same topic, but I would not say that it is a bad thing.

'cause应改为because更正式；different opinions后应接介词on而非in；去掉重复的I would。

× I think argue is like one-of-a-kind, one of the communications which is important in a relationship of friends 'cause we have to express our own feelings and we just have to say it and then, umm, make a.

✓ I think arguing is a kind of communication which is important in a friendship because we have to express our own feelings and just say it.

argue应改为动名词arguing作主语；one-of-a-kind用法不当，改为a kind of communication；relationship of friends应改为friendship；句子末尾不完整，简化为just say it。