Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'the basic reason behind is' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax from my busy schedule. Moreover, we often talk about family matters, daily routines, and our personal and family goals.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to separate topics. Avoid vague phrases like 'different type of the issues'.

Example: I usually chat about various topics depending on the context. For example, at work, I discuss project requirements and procedures with colleagues, while at home, I talk with my family about daily routines.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some awkward phrasing and redundancy. Use clearer linking words and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, improve sentence flow for better coherence.

Example: I prefer chatting with one friend because it offers more privacy. In a group, it's difficult to discuss personal or work-related issues. Also, one-on-one conversations allow me to share problems and find solutions more easily.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar mistakes like 'discuss and solution on that time'.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to discuss issues immediately and improve my communication and problem-solving skills. In contrast, social media makes it harder to find solutions quickly.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but could be improved by correcting minor grammar errors and making the example more specific. Use linking words to enhance coherence.

Example: Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends when we have different opinions on certain topics. However, these arguments are friendly and help us understand each other better. For instance, we often debate about movies or important daily events.

× The basic reason behind is that this gave me a relaxation from my schedule.

✓ The basic reason behind it is that this gives me relaxation from my schedule.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'gave' when the present tense 'gives' is appropriate to describe a current, ongoing effect. Also, 'the basic reason behind' is incomplete and needs 'it' to be grammatically correct. Use present tense to express habitual or general truths.

× In addition to this, during chatting, I personally discuss the family issues, daily routines along with the family goals and the personal goals which to be achieved in life.

✓ In addition to this, during chatting, I personally discuss family issues, daily routines, along with family goals and personal goals to be achieved in life.

The phrase 'the family issues' and 'the personal goals which to be achieved' are awkward. Articles 'the' are unnecessary before plural nouns when speaking generally. Also, 'which to be achieved' is incorrect; it should be 'to be achieved' to express purpose or intention.

× Or during a chatting I discuss with different type of the issues with my friends and family members, but at the work I discuss with them according to the work orientation what are the requirements and procedures for the specific project.

✓ During chatting, I discuss different types of issues with my friends and family members, but at work, I discuss with them, according to work orientation, the requirements and procedures for specific projects.

The phrase 'Or during a chatting' is incorrect; 'chatting' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. 'Different type of the issues' should be 'different types of issues' to match plural form. 'At the work' should be 'at work' without 'the'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× In addition to this, at home I discuss with the family their daily routine matters.

✓ In addition to this, at home I discuss their daily routine matters with my family.

The phrase 'discuss with the family their daily routine matters' is awkward. The verb 'discuss' is typically followed directly by the object, and the person with whom you discuss is introduced with 'with'. Rearranging improves clarity and correctness.

× The first reason behind is that because of the privacy in Group, we can't discuss the family issues and the workplace issues.

✓ The first reason is that because of the privacy in a group, we can't discuss family issues and workplace issues.

'The first reason behind is that' is incorrect; it should be 'The first reason is that'. 'Privacy in Group' needs an article and should be 'privacy in a group'. Also, articles before plural nouns like 'family issues' and 'workplace issues' are unnecessary when speaking generally.

× And in addition to this, uh I can share face to face problems and get a solution when I discuss with my friends.

✓ In addition to this, I can share face-to-face problems and get a solution when I discuss with my friends.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and unnecessary here. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. The filler 'uh' should be omitted in formal speech. The sentence is clearer and more formal after correction.

× First and foremost reason is that due to face to face communication I can discuss and solution on that time and it helps to improve my communication and problem solving skills.

✓ The first and foremost reason is that due to face-to-face communication, I can discuss and find solutions at that time, and it helps to improve my communication and problem-solving skills.

'First and foremost reason' needs the definite article 'The'. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'. 'Discuss and solution' is incorrect; 'solution' is a noun and needs a verb like 'find' to make sense. 'On that time' should be 'at that time'. 'Problem solving' should be hyphenated as 'problem-solving' when used as an adjective.

× Whereas on social media it is very hard to get a solution and improve the skills which are required in work.

✓ Whereas on social media, it is very hard to get a solution and improve the skills required at work.

A comma is needed after 'on social media' for clarity. 'Skills which are required in work' is awkward; 'skills required at work' is more natural and concise.

× Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, especially when we have a different opinion on a particular topics.

✓ Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on particular topics.

'A different opinion' should be plural 'different opinions' to agree with 'topics' which is plural. Also, 'a particular topics' is incorrect; 'particular' should agree in number with 'topics', so either 'a particular topic' or 'particular topics'.

× For example, we might debate on a movie and daily events which are important to in our life.

✓ For example, we might debate a movie and daily events which are important in our lives.

The verb 'debate' does not require the preposition 'on' in this context. 'Important to in our life' is incorrect; it should be 'important in our lives' to be grammatically correct and natural.