Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như 'want to tell to each others' nên sửa thành 'want to tell each other'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when we share exciting stories. For instance, we often talk about memorable school days or trips we have taken together.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không rõ ràng như 'ask my friends for funds' và các từ thừa như 'uh'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh nói lặp lại.

Example: We usually chat about our daily activities. For example, I often ask my friends how their day went or if they were tired after a trip.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'so just skip it in secret'. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it helps us keep our conversations private. In a group, secrets are harder to keep because many people are involved.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng và không rõ nghĩa, ví dụ như 'I'm no, I'm the one who are not good income communication'. Bạn nên diễn đạt rõ ràng và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng để truyền đạt ý của mình.

Example: I prefer to communicate via social media because I find it easier than face-to-face conversations, as I sometimes feel shy speaking directly.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, có cấu trúc rõ ràng và sử dụng ví dụ cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể thêm một vài liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn.

Example: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions. For instance, we might disagree about which movie to watch or where to eat. Nevertheless, we usually resolve our arguments quickly because we respect each other's ideas.

× I love chatting with my friends especially when we have some amazing stories want to tell to each others.

✓ I love chatting with my friends especially when we have some amazing stories to tell each other.

The phrase 'want to tell to each others' is incorrect because 'each other' is used without 's' and the verb 'want' is unnecessary here. The correct form is 'stories to tell each other.' This fixes the singular/plural and pronoun usage.

× For example an exciting stories about school days or a journey that we went to.

✓ For example, exciting stories about school days or a journey that we went on.

The phrase 'an exciting stories' mixes singular article 'an' with plural noun 'stories'. It should be 'exciting stories' without 'an'. Also, 'went to' should be 'went on' for journeys.

× We usually talk about our day schedules, for example, uh, after the day, I usually ask my friends for funds sometime just kidding and ask her about her journey.

✓ We usually talk about our daily schedules. For example, after the day, I usually ask my friends for funds, sometimes just kidding, and ask her about her journey.

The phrase 'day schedules' is better as 'daily schedules' to express routine. Also, punctuation and sentence structure are improved for clarity.

× I usually ask my friends for funds sometime just kidding and ask her about her journey.

✓ I usually ask my friends for funds, sometimes just kidding, and ask them about their journeys.

The pronouns 'her' and 'friends' are inconsistent. 'Friends' is plural, so pronouns should be plural 'them' and 'their'.

× Uh, was she tired?

✓ Was she tired?

The filler 'Uh' is unnecessary in formal speech and can be omitted for clarity.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because we want to keep our secret.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because we want to keep our secrets.

The word 'secret' should be plural 'secrets' because 'we' implies multiple secrets or shared secrets.

× If there are so many friends in a group, everyone will know our stories, so just skip it in secret.

✓ If there are so many friends in a group, everyone will know our stories, so we just keep it secret.

The phrase 'just skip it in secret' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'keep it secret' to mean not sharing information.

× I prefer to communicate via social media because I'm no, I'm the one who are not good income communication.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I'm not good at communication.

The phrase 'who are not good income communication' is grammatically incorrect. It should be 'who is not good at communication' or simplified to 'I'm not good at communication.' Also, 'income' is incorrect here.