Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and incomplete sentences. For example, start with a clear statement, then explain why you prefer calling over chatting.

Example: I prefer calling my friends rather than chatting because it feels more personal and allows me to understand their well-being better. Moreover, talking directly helps me connect with them more comfortably.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your preference. Avoid repeating ideas and focus on specific content you chat about if possible.

Example: Usually, I just greet my friends briefly in chats because long conversations take up too much time. Instead, I prefer calling them personally to have more meaningful discussions about their lives.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat vague and contains grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear statement and then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Try to avoid ambiguous phrases like 'according to the my preference'.

Example: I prefer chatting with either a group or a single friend depending on the situation. For example, group chats are good for sharing general news, while one-on-one chats are better for personal conversations.

Suggestion: Your answer has some repetition and unclear phrases. Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your preference and exceptions. Avoid repeating words and ensure grammatical accuracy.

Example: I usually prefer face-to-face communication because it is more personal. However, when meeting in person is not possible due to time or distance, I use social media to stay connected.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear response and explain your attitude towards arguments with friends using linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Example: Sometimes I argue with my friends when our opinions differ. However, I try to express my views calmly and respect theirs to avoid conflicts.

× I prefer to call rather than chatting with friends.

✓ I prefer to call rather than chat with friends.

After 'prefer to', the verb should be in base form, and after 'rather than', parallel structure requires the base form 'chat' instead of the gerund 'chatting'.

× Whenever I get time I try to call personally to them to know their well-being.

✓ Whenever I get time, I try to call them personally to know about their well-being.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary after 'call' when indicating the person being called. Also, 'know their well-being' requires 'know about their well-being' for correct usage.

× Uh what are they doing?

✓ I ask them what they are doing.

The sentence fragment 'Uh what are they doing?' is incomplete and unclear. It should be restructured to a complete sentence to convey the intended meaning.

× So this makes me feel more comfortable than chatting.

✓ So this makes me feel more comfortable than chatting does.

To complete the comparison, the verb 'does' is needed after 'chatting' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× This is what I.

✓ This is what I prefer.

The sentence is incomplete and needs a verb to complete the thought.

× I usually say hi hello to my friends in chat.

✓ I usually say hi and hello to my friends in chat.

The phrase 'hi hello' should be connected with 'and' to correctly list greetings.

× I don't prefer to have a long chat because it consumes a lot of my time rather than I prefer to call them personally and know they're all being what are they doing it.

✓ I don't prefer to have a long chat because it consumes a lot of my time; rather, I prefer to call them personally and know how they are doing.

The sentence is run-on and confusing. 'Rather than' is incorrectly used; it should be 'rather,' and the phrase 'know they're all being what are they doing it' is incorrect and needs to be rephrased to 'know how they are doing.'

× It makes me more passionate than chatting.

✓ It makes me more comfortable than chatting.

The word 'passionate' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is likely 'comfortable' as in previous sentences.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people and only one according to the my preference and the situation.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people or only one person according to my preference and the situation.

The phrase 'and only one' is unclear; it should be 'or only one person' to correctly contrast the options. Also, 'the my preference' is incorrect; 'my preference' is correct.

× There is no hard and fast rule to speak with a group of people or only one situation has to permit.

✓ There is no hard and fast rule about speaking with a group of people or only one person; the situation has to permit it.

The sentence is awkward and missing articles and conjunctions. 'To speak' should be 'about speaking,' and 'only one situation' is unclear; it should be 'only one person.' Also, the sentence needs to be split for clarity.

× Most of the time I prefer to communicate face to face cell, but all the times the situations and the time may not permit to meet the personally.

✓ Most of the time, I prefer to communicate face to face, but sometimes the situation and time may not permit me to meet them personally.

The phrase 'face to face cell' is incorrect; 'face to face' is correct. 'All the times' should be 'sometimes.' 'Permit to meet the personally' is incorrect; it should be 'permit me to meet them personally.'

× So then I prefer to communicate through social media, through through chat, through messages.

✓ So then I prefer to communicate through social media, through chat, and through messages.

The phrase 'through through' is a repetition error. Also, adding 'and' before the last item in the list improves clarity.

× I do argue at times, then my opinions contradicts with the other person's opinions.

✓ I do argue at times when my opinions contradict the other person's opinions.

'Contradicts' should be 'contradict' to agree with plural subject 'opinions.' Also, 'contradict with' is incorrect; 'contradict' does not require 'with.' The sentence structure is improved by using 'when' instead of 'then.'

× Obviously I argue and and rather than argue, I submit my opinion and I.

✓ Obviously, I argue, but rather than arguing, I submit my opinion.

The sentence has repetition 'and and' and is incomplete. 'Rather than argue' should be 'rather than arguing' to maintain parallel structure. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.