Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਸਹੀ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਕਈ ਵਾਰ ਗਲਤ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਦੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਹੋਈ ਹੈ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਬਣਾਉਣ ਲਈ, ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ ਅਤੇ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਦੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਕਰੋ।

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I often stay at home after completing my studies, so talking with them helps me stay connected and share various things.

Suggestion: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਿਸਥਾਰ ਅਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਦੀ ਘਾਟ ਹੈ। ਆਪਣੇ ਵਿਚਾਰਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਬਣਾਉਣ ਲਈ, ਵਧੇਰੇ ਵਿਸਥਾਰ ਅਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤੋ।

Example: I usually chat with my friends about sports, physical fitness, and ways to improve mental health on a daily basis because these topics interest us all.

Suggestion: ਜਵਾਬ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਸਵਾਲ ਦਾ ਸਿੱਧਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਦਿਓ ਅਤੇ ਆਪਣੇ ਵਿਚਾਰਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਕਰਨ ਲਈ ਉਦਾਹਰਨਾਂ ਦਿਓ।

Example: I prefer chatting with one friend when I need advice on important decisions, but I enjoy group chats for casual conversations.

Suggestion: ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਅਤੇ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਦੀ ਗਲਤ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਹੈ। ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ ਬਣਾਉਣ ਲਈ, ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਅੰਗਰੇਜ਼ੀ ਵਰਤੋ।

Example: Nowadays, many people use social media to communicate, but I prefer face-to-face conversations because they are more personal and clear.

Suggestion: ਜਵਾਬ ਗੈਰ-ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਵਿੱਚ ਗਲਤ ਹੈ। ਆਪਣੇ ਵਿਚਾਰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਬਣਾਉਣ ਲਈ ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ ਅਤੇ ਉਦਾਹਰਨਾਂ ਦਿਓ।

Example: I don't argue with my friends often, but sometimes we have disagreements because everyone has different opinions, which is natural.

× Definitely, I like the chatting with friends 'cause nowadays I am to stay home because my study is com completed and five years ago, so I have to chatting with my friends and discuss about the all things.

✓ Definitely, I like chatting with friends because nowadays I have to stay home since my study was completed five years ago, so I have to chat with my friends and discuss all things.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'chatting' and 'all things'. In English, 'chatting' as a gerund does not require 'the'. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' is a transitive verb and does not need 'about'. The sentence also had tense and structure issues corrected for clarity.

× Definitely, I like the chatting with friends 'cause nowadays I am to stay home because my study is com completed and five years ago, so I have to chatting with my friends and discuss about the all things.

✓ Definitely, I like chatting with friends because nowadays I have to stay home since my study was completed five years ago, so I have to chat with my friends and discuss all things.

The phrase 'have to chatting' is incorrect; after 'have to' the base form of the verb should be used, so 'chat' instead of 'chatting'.

× Definitely, I like the chatting with friends 'cause nowadays I am to stay home because my study is com completed and five years ago, so I have to chatting with my friends and discuss about the all things.

✓ Definitely, I like chatting with friends because nowadays I have to stay home since my study was completed five years ago, so I have to chat with my friends and discuss all things.

The phrase 'my study is com completed and five years ago' is incorrect. The past tense 'was completed' should be used to indicate the action happened in the past.

× I have chat with my friends like at sports and physical fitness and how to improve the mental health in a daily basis. I also discuss with my friends.

✓ I have chatted with my friends about sports, physical fitness, and how to improve mental health on a daily basis. I also discuss these topics with my friends.

The present perfect tense requires the past participle form 'chatted' instead of 'chat'. Also, 'in a daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'.

× I have chat with my friends like at sports and physical fitness and how to improve the mental health in a daily basis. I also discuss with my friends.

✓ I have chatted with my friends about sports, physical fitness, and how to improve mental health on a daily basis. I also discuss these topics with my friends.

The preposition 'like at' is incorrect; 'about' is the correct preposition to indicate topics of discussion. Also, 'in a daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'.

× It's not dependent upon the situations when I have to make any decision for my life. It should depend on in the future of my life. So that time I will discuss about.

✓ It doesn't depend on the situation when I have to make any decision in my life. It should depend on the future of my life. At that time, I will discuss it.

The pronoun usage is unclear and incorrect. 'It's not dependent upon the situations' should be 'It doesn't depend on the situation'. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'.

× It's not dependent upon the situations when I have to make any decision for my life. It should depend on in the future of my life. So that time I will discuss about.

✓ It doesn't depend on the situation when I have to make any decision in my life. It should depend on the future of my life. At that time, I will discuss it.

The phrase 'depend on in the future' is incorrect; 'depend on the future' is correct. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not take 'about'.

× Then nowadays people have to mote most attached into the social medias and discuss about all things on these platform. But I am the totally different from those person I have to believe to discuss about things to face to face, take answer wrong the physical physics.

✓ Nowadays, people are mostly attached to social media and discuss all things on these platforms. But I am totally different from those people; I believe in discussing things face to face to avoid misunderstandings.

'The social medias' is incorrect; 'social media' is uncountable and does not take 'the' here. 'Discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'. 'Those person' should be 'those people'. The sentence was also restructured for clarity.

× Then nowadays people have to mote most attached into the social medias and discuss about all things on these platform. But I am the totally different from those person I have to believe to discuss about things to face to face, take answer wrong the physical physics.

✓ Nowadays, people are mostly attached to social media and discuss all things on these platforms. But I am totally different from those people; I believe in discussing things face to face to avoid misunderstandings.

The preposition 'attached into' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'attached to'. Also, 'on these platform' should be 'on these platforms'.

× Then nowadays people have to mote most attached into the social medias and discuss about all things on these platform. But I am the totally different from those person I have to believe to discuss about things to face to face, take answer wrong the physical physics.

✓ Nowadays, people are mostly attached to social media and discuss all things on these platforms. But I am totally different from those people; I believe in discussing things face to face to avoid misunderstandings.

The pronoun 'I am the totally different from those person' is incorrect; it should be 'I am totally different from those people'.

× Not too many time but sometimes I argue with my friends because every person has a different thought and they can think about the different mindset so sometime I will not. Not we show the trust on friends ideas that that.

✓ Not too many times, but sometimes I argue with my friends because every person has different thoughts and they can have different mindsets. Sometimes, I do not show trust in my friends' ideas.

'Not too many time' should be 'Not too many times'. 'Different thought' should be plural 'different thoughts'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. The sentence was restructured for clarity and correct quantifier usage.

× Not too many time but sometimes I argue with my friends because every person has a different thought and they can think about the different mindset so sometime I will not. Not we show the trust on friends ideas that that.

✓ Not too many times, but sometimes I argue with my friends because every person has different thoughts and they can have different mindsets. Sometimes, I do not show trust in my friends' ideas.

The pronoun usage 'Not we show the trust on friends ideas that that' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'Sometimes, I do not show trust in my friends' ideas'.