Part 1
Examiner
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidate
Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially I receive a lot of pressure from work.
Examiner
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidate
Most time we complain about our work and talk about how exhaust is the issues we encounter during our work time.
Examiner
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidate
I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think is one of the best way to conduct a very deep conversation. If you talk to a group of people, you may won't have enough time to express yourself.
Examiner
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidate
I prefer to communicate face because I think eye contact is very crucial when you talk to people and through social media, especially nowadays, people like to use emoji. I think it's not a good way to express their authentic emotion.
Examiner
Do you argue with friends?
Candidate
No, I'm a person who tried to avoid any conflicts because every time we have conflicts I will try to find a way to solve it and most of the time I compromise.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答时应更自然流畅,避免语法错误,如“especially I receive”应改为“especially when I receive”。同时,回答可以更具体,说明聊天如何帮助缓解压力。
Example: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I feel stressed from work because it helps me relax and feel supported.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如“how exhaust is the issues”应改为“how exhausting the issues are”。建议使用更准确的表达,并增加细节使内容更丰富。
Example: Most of the time, we talk about the challenges we face at work and how exhausting some tasks can be, which helps us share our feelings.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误,如“may won't”应改为“may not”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯,并简化表达以更自然。
Example: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it allows for deeper conversations, whereas in a group, you might not have enough time to express yourself fully.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中“communicate face”应为“communicate face-to-face”。建议使用连接词使观点更连贯,并用更自然的表达方式说明原因。
Example: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because eye contact is very important, and social media often relies on emojis, which don't always convey true emotions.
Do you argue with friends?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答中时态不一致,如“tried”应为“try”。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并更具体说明解决冲突的方法。
Example: No, I try to avoid conflicts with my friends. Whenever disagreements arise, I look for solutions and usually compromise to maintain harmony.
× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially I receive a lot of pressure from work.
✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially since I receive a lot of pressure from work.
句中缺少连接词“since”来引导原因状语从句,导致句子结构不完整。应加上“since”使句子更通顺。
× Most time we complain about our work and talk about how exhaust is the issues we encounter during our work time.
✓ Most of the time we complain about our work and talk about how exhausting the issues we encounter during our work time are.
“Most time”应为“Most of the time”,表示大多数时间;“exhaust”应为形容词形式“exhausting”,修饰“the issues”;“is”与复数“issues”不一致,应调整句子结构。
× Most time we complain about our work and talk about how exhaust is the issues we encounter during our work time.
✓ Most of the time we complain about our work and talk about how exhausting the issues we encounter during our work time are.
同上,主谓一致错误,需调整动词与主语一致。
× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think is one of the best way to conduct a very deep conversation.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think it is one of the best ways to conduct a very deep conversation.
“way”应为复数“ways”,因为“one of the best”后面接复数名词;缺少主语“it”,导致句子不完整。
× If you talk to a group of people, you may won't have enough time to express yourself.
✓ If you talk to a group of people, you may not have enough time to express yourself.
“may”与“won't”不能连用,应使用“may not”表示可能性否定。
× I prefer to communicate face because I think eye contact is very crucial when you talk to people and through social media, especially nowadays, people like to use emoji.
✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I think eye contact is very crucial when you talk to people, and through social media, especially nowadays, people like to use emojis.
“communicate face”应为“communicate face-to-face”,表示面对面交流;“emoji”应为复数“emojis”,表示多个表情符号。
× I prefer to communicate face because I think eye contact is very crucial when you talk to people and through social media, especially nowadays, people like to use emoji.
✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I think eye contact is very crucial when you talk to people, and through social media, especially nowadays, people like to use emojis.
同上,复数形式错误。
× No, I'm a person who tried to avoid any conflicts because every time we have conflicts I will try to find a way to solve it and most of the time I compromise.
✓ No, I'm a person who tries to avoid any conflicts because every time we have conflicts I try to find a way to solve them and most of the time I compromise.
“tried”应为一般现在时“tries”,因为描述习惯性行为;“will try”改为“try”保持时态一致;“solve it”中的“it”应为复数“them”,指代“conflicts”。