Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'Cured happiness'. Hãy tập trung vào việc trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows us to share our opinions and memories. It makes me feel happy and relaxed after a long day.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và cụ thể hơn để mô tả chủ đề trò chuyện.

Example: We usually chat about school lessons, discuss problems, share opinions, homework, and study tips, especially in my accounting class.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần được tổ chức tốt hơn với ngữ pháp chính xác. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it feels more comfortable to share opinions. In a group, there are too many opinions which can be confusing.

Suggestion: Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời, tránh để câu bị dang dở. Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để thể hiện ý rõ ràng.

Example: I like using social media because I can comfortably share my opinions through text. However, I think face-to-face communication is better because it feels more real and personal.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả sự việc một cách cụ thể hơn.

Example: Yes, I have argued with friends before. The most memorable argument was in high school when an old friend said bad things about me.

× I like reading, uh, talking about something with my friends which shares our opinions and memories and everything.

✓ I like reading, uh, talking about things with my friends which share our opinions and memories and everything.

The verb 'shares' should be 'share' to agree with the plural subject 'friends'. Also, 'something' is vague; 'things' fits better here.

× Cured happiness that inspired me so much.

✓ It is a pure happiness that inspires me so much.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'It is' and correcting 'Cured' to 'pure' and 'inspired' to 'inspires' makes it a complete and meaningful sentence.

× We are discussed about one problem, a new lecture, and we share opinions, we share homework, share tips together.

✓ We discussed one problem, a new lecture, and we shared opinions, homework, and tips together.

The phrase 'are discussed' is incorrect; the past tense 'discussed' is appropriate. Also, 'share' should be in past tense 'shared' to maintain tense consistency.

× Especially in my accountant.

✓ Especially in my accounting class.

The word 'accountant' is a person, but the context suggests 'accounting class' is intended.

× Oh, I prefer chat with only one friends and we call it the talk.

✓ Oh, I prefer chatting with only one friend and we call it the talk.

After 'prefer', the gerund form 'chatting' is correct. Also, 'friends' should be singular 'friend' to match 'only one'.

× Yes, when we face just one people, we share Opinions come comfortably because one in the group, there's so much opinion, there's so many opinions.

✓ Yes, when we face just one person, we share opinions comfortably because in a group, there are so many opinions.

'People' is plural; 'person' is singular. 'Opinions' should be lowercase. 'Come comfortably' is incorrect; 'share opinions comfortably' is better. 'There's so much opinion' is incorrect; 'there are so many opinions' is correct.

× Actually, I like social media because I can come comfortably share my opinions through the text, but I think it's better to communicate face to face because it's more realistic and uh, we just.

✓ Actually, I like social media because I can comfortably share my opinions through text, but I think it's better to communicate face to face because it's more realistic.

'Come comfortably share' is incorrect; 'comfortably share' is correct. 'Through the text' should be 'through text'. The sentence ends abruptly; removing 'and uh, we just' makes it complete.

× Yes, definitely. And I think the most bad, the most memorable in my life is as, uh, in the high school I argued with the old friends of she is talking, she's talking not good about me.

✓ Yes, definitely. And I think the worst, the most memorable in my life was in high school when I argued with an old friend who was talking badly about me.

'Most bad' should be 'worst'. 'Is' should be 'was' for past event. 'Old friends of she is talking' is incorrect; corrected to 'an old friend who was talking'. 'Not good about me' is corrected to 'talking badly about me'.