Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 만들고, 중복되는 표현을 줄이세요. 예를 들어, 'sharing my daily days or something' 대신 구체적인 표현을 사용하고, 시제 일치를 주의하세요.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows us to share our daily experiences and stay connected. I can tell them what I did today and learn about their activities as well.

Suggestion: 답변이 명확하지 않고 어색한 표현이 많습니다. 관심사에 대해 구체적으로 말하고, 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Usually, I chat with my friends about our shared interests, such as our favorite idols. We often discuss the latest news about singers or actors we like.

Suggestion: 문장이 매우 불명확하고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 자신의 선호를 명확히 표현하고, 이유를 간결하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: It depends on who is in the group. If I know and like everyone, I prefer group chats. Otherwise, I prefer chatting with just one close friend.

Suggestion: 중복된 내용이 있고 문장이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 이유를 명확히 하고, 문장을 간결하게 표현하세요.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because seeing my friends' faces and eyes helps me feel closer to them.

Suggestion: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 많습니다. 과거와 현재를 구분하여 명확하게 말하고, 문장을 간결하게 만드세요.

Example: I don't argue with my friends now, but when I was a child, I often had arguments because I was a teenager. I think many children argue with their friends, but now that I'm older, I avoid arguments.

× I really like chatting with my friends because it's like sharing my daily days or something.

✓ I really like chatting with my friends because it's like sharing my daily life or something.

The phrase 'my daily days' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'my daily life' to refer to everyday experiences.

× I think it's important of friendship and I can share what did I do today and then what am I doing now and then I also can know what my friend doing or something.

✓ I think friendship is important and I can share what I did today and what I am doing now, and I can also know what my friend is doing or something.

The phrase 'important of friendship' is incorrect; it should be 'friendship is important'. Also, the word order in 'what did I do today' and 'what am I doing now' is incorrect in indirect speech; it should be 'what I did today' and 'what I am doing now'. Additionally, 'what my friend doing' lacks the auxiliary verb 'is'.

× Usually I chat with my friend about our interest, something just like Oh my friend and me like idol.

✓ Usually I chat with my friends about our interests, something like 'Oh, my friend and I like idols.'

The singular 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context. 'Interest' should be plural 'interests' because it refers to multiple topics. Also, 'me' should be 'I' as the subject of the clause.

× We will talk about idol or handsome guy or pretty girl.

✓ We will talk about idols or handsome guys or pretty girls.

The nouns 'idol', 'handsome guy', and 'pretty girl' should be plural to indicate general topics of conversation.

× It depends on the group that have a who I prefer group chat but if the group chat have some people I don't know, someone I don't like group chat is I chat only one friend is better.

✓ It depends on the group. I prefer group chats, but if the group chat has some people I don't know or don't like, chatting with only one friend is better.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. It needs to be split into clearer sentences with correct subject-verb agreement and word order.

× But if the group that have all people is I know maybe I like the group chat.

✓ But if the group has all people I know, maybe I like the group chat.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'group'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see my friends face and eyes it can make feel more closely.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see my friend's face and eyes; it can make me feel closer.

The phrase 'my friends face' needs a possessive apostrophe: 'my friend's face'. 'Make feel more closely' is incorrect; it should be 'make me feel closer'.

× I like to talk with face to face because I like talking with connected eyes.

✓ I like to talk face to face because I like talking while making eye contact.

The phrase 'talk with face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'talk face to face'. 'Talking with connected eyes' is unnatural; 'talking while making eye contact' is clearer.

× I don't have a argue with friends now, but when I was child I had so many argues with my friend because the teenager childhood.

✓ I don't argue with friends now, but when I was a child, I had many arguments with my friends because of teenage childhood.

'Have a argue' is incorrect; it should be 'argue'. 'When I was child' needs the article 'a'. 'Argues' should be 'arguments'. 'Because the teenager childhood' is incorrect; it should be 'because of teenage childhood'.

× I think so many children have argued with their friends.

✓ I think many children have argued with their friends.

'So many' is acceptable but 'many' is more natural here. No plural issue, but slight improvement for naturalness.

× I think it's not normal.

✓ I think it's normal.

The student likely meant to say 'I think it's normal' as arguing with friends is common; if not, no grammar error here.

× But for now I'm already older.

✓ But now I'm older.

'For now' is incorrect here; 'now' is the correct adverb to indicate the present time.

× I don't argue.

✓ I don't argue.

This sentence is correct.