Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and complete by avoiding incomplete sentences and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences. For example, you can say: "Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it is a great way to share our opinions and problems. Additionally, we update each other on personal and world matters, often while enjoying meals together."

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it is a great way to share our opinions and problems. Additionally, we update each other on personal and world matters, often while enjoying meals together.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and coherence by using correct vocabulary and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and incomplete sentences. For example, you can say: "We usually chat about current events and news around us, sharing our opinions. We also discuss our future plans, especially career goals, which is really exciting because we learn from each other."

Example: We usually chat about current events and news around us, sharing our opinions. We also discuss our future plans, especially career goals, which is really exciting because we learn from each other.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say: "I prefer chatting with a group of people because I enjoy the broad opinions and diverse perspectives. Also, it is a great way to expand my social circle."

Example: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I enjoy the broad opinions and diverse perspectives. Also, it is a great way to expand my social circle.

Suggestion: Good answer but try to avoid filler words like "uh" and repetition. Also, use linking words to improve flow. For example: "It actually depends on the situation. For casual conversations or with people near me, I prefer face-to-face communication. However, to keep in touch with distant friends or when I'm busy, I use social media because it is more convenient."

Example: It actually depends on the situation. For casual conversations or with people near me, I prefer face-to-face communication. However, to keep in touch with distant friends or when I'm busy, I use social media because it is more convenient.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and clarity by using correct subject pronouns and verb forms. Also, use linking words to connect ideas. For example: "Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends and family, usually due to disagreements on personal preferences and opinions. However, we resolve these matters quickly, which helps us understand each other better."

Example: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends and family, usually due to disagreements on personal preferences and opinions. However, we resolve these matters quickly, which helps us understand each other better.

× Yes, I do enjoy chatting with my friends because it is great way to share our opinions and problems as well as to.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy chatting with my friends because it is a great way to share our opinions and problems as well as to.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'a' before the singular noun phrase 'great way'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× As well as to update our current status about personal matters or world related matters.

✓ It is also a way to update our current status about personal matters or world-related matters.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a main verb. Starting with 'As well as to' without a main clause causes the sentence to be incomplete. Rewriting it as a complete sentence with a subject and verb corrects the structure.

× We usually chat uh, why enjoying meals at.

✓ We usually chat while enjoying meals.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains unclear phrasing ('why enjoying meals at'). The corrected sentence uses 'while' to indicate simultaneous actions and completes the thought properly.

× We easily chat about the current events and news that occurred around us and we shot OPI our opinion regarding the events and also we like to talk about our future, especially in career planning and it's really exciting to know about others upgrade what others.

✓ We easily chat about the current events and news that occur around us and share our opinions regarding the events. We also like to talk about our future, especially career planning, and it's really exciting to learn about others' progress.

The original sentence has unclear phrases ('shot OPI', 'upgrade what others') and incorrect verb forms. 'Occurred' should be 'occur' to match present tense. 'Share our opinions' is clearer than 'shot OPI'. 'Learn about others' progress' replaces unclear wording. Also, possessive form 'others'' is needed.

× Yes, I yes, I prefer to have a conversation with a group of people because I love the broad opinion and the diverse perspective from the group discussions.

✓ Yes, I prefer to have a conversation with a group of people because I love the broad opinions and diverse perspectives from group discussions.

The phrase 'the broad opinion' and 'the diverse perspective' should be plural to match the context of multiple opinions and perspectives. Also, the repeated 'Yes, I' is redundant and removed.

× Also, is it it is a great way to. I spent hours social circle.

✓ Also, it is a great way to spend hours in a social circle.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain repeated words ('is it it is'). The correction combines the ideas into a complete sentence with proper verb form and prepositions.

× It's actually depends on situations.

✓ It actually depends on the situation.

'It's' (it is) should be 'It' without contraction because 'depends' is the main verb. Also, 'situations' is better as singular 'situation' in this context. The modal verb 'actually' is an adverb here, so the correction clarifies the subject-verb agreement.

× for casual conversations or for people that near to me, I prefer to have a face face to face conversations.

✓ For casual conversations or for people who are near me, I prefer to have face-to-face conversations.

'People that near to me' is incorrect; 'people who are near me' is correct. Also, 'face face to face conversations' is redundant; 'face-to-face conversations' is the correct form. The preposition 'to' after 'near' is unnecessary.

× But for keeping in touch with someone far away or when I'm busy, I prefer to use social media. Social media because it's more convenient.

✓ But for keeping in touch with someone far away or when I'm busy, I prefer to use social media because it's more convenient.

The second sentence 'Social media because it's more convenient.' is a fragment. Combining it with the previous sentence creates a complete sentence with proper structure.

× Yes, sometime I do argue with my friends and family.

✓ Yes, sometimes I do argue with my friends and family.

The adverb 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Sometime' means 'at some point' while 'sometimes' means 'occasionally' which fits the context.

× Usually you have disagreement on our personal preference and opinions, but we can resolve the matters quickly and I find it being beneficial to help us understand each other better.

✓ Usually, we have disagreements about our personal preferences and opinions, but we can resolve the matters quickly and I find it beneficial to help us understand each other better.

'You have disagreement' should be 'we have disagreements' to maintain consistent pronouns. 'Disagreement' should be plural 'disagreements' to match the context. 'On' should be 'about'. 'Find it being beneficial' is awkward; 'find it beneficial' is correct.