Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your feelings and reasons. Avoid redundancy and ensure correct sentence structure.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I feel comfortable sharing my thoughts openly with them, and I really appreciate this quality in our friendship.

Suggestion: Your answer is too long and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Be specific and concise in your response.

Example: I usually chat with my friends about daily routines, our thoughts, future plans, and sometimes we share secrets to strengthen our bond.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains hesitations. Make sure to finish your sentences and avoid filler words. Provide a clear preference and reasons with linking words for coherence.

Example: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I enjoy chatting with a group of classmates to reminisce about school days and funny moments, but other times I prefer one-on-one conversations for more personal discussions.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but contains some hesitations and minor errors. Try to avoid filler words and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I prefer to communicate face-to-face with close friends because it's easier to understand their emotions, which can be difficult to interpret through social media.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Provide reasons with linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, I do argue with friends sometimes because we all have different thoughts and feelings, which can lead to disagreements.

× Yes I do because my friend as a person with whom I feel free and share my thoughts openly, I so appreciate this this quality and her.

✓ Yes, I do because my friend is a person with whom I feel free and share my thoughts openly. I really appreciate this quality and her.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'my friend', which is necessary to complete the sentence structure. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs to be split for clarity. Adding 'is' corrects the sentence structure and improves readability.

× I usually chat with my friends about various topics such as daily routines, about our thoughts and even about our plans and we share with each other about our secrets and also I share my.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about various topics such as daily routines, our thoughts, and even our plans. We share our secrets with each other, and I also share mine.

The repeated use of 'about' is unnecessary and awkward. It's better to list topics without repeating 'about'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'I share my', which is incomplete. Completing it as 'I also share mine' clarifies the meaning.

× It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer to chat with a group of my specialty classmates, uh, to remember all about our our school days, our funny moments, about our studies, or about our teachers. However, I prefer to.

✓ It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer to chat with a group of my specialty classmates to remember our school days, funny moments, studies, or teachers. However, I prefer to chat with one friend sometimes.

The sentence is incomplete and contains repeated words ('our our'). The phrase 'uh' is informal and unnecessary. The sentence ends abruptly with 'However, I prefer to.' Completing the sentence and removing repetitions improves clarity and correctness.

× I prefer to communicate face to face with my close friend because it's the best way to know about their emoji, about their feelings. Uh, because I am so sensitive person and with social media, it's difficult. It's tricky to know what he feels.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face with my close friend because it's the best way to understand their emotions and feelings. Because I am a sensitive person, it's difficult to know what someone feels through social media.

The phrase 'know about their emoji' is incorrect; 'emotions' fits better. 'A sensitive person' requires the article 'a'. The sentence structure is improved by combining related ideas and removing informal fillers like 'uh'.

× Honestly yes I do because every of us knows that every person have her thoughts feelings and sometimes I my thoughts not odd with my friend that's why we argue with each other.

✓ Honestly, yes I do because every one of us knows that every person has her thoughts and feelings. Sometimes my thoughts do not agree with my friend's, and that's why we argue with each other.

'Every of us' should be 'every one of us'. 'Every person have' should be 'every person has' to agree in number. 'I my thoughts not odd with my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'my thoughts do not agree with my friend's'. These corrections fix singular/plural and verb agreement errors.