Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ответ содержит много повторений и нечетких выражений, таких как "uh" и "I also did video calls". Рекомендуется использовать более естественные и связные фразы, избегать лишних слов и пауз, а также структурировать ответ с четким вступлением и поддерживающими деталями.

Example: Yes, I used to enjoy chatting with friends a lot when I was younger. I often spent my free time using various messaging apps and making video calls, which I found very enjoyable. However, nowadays I don't chat as much because I have fewer friends.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит много пауз и нечетких выражений, а также немного неорганизован. Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова для логичности и более конкретные детали, чтобы сделать ответ более естественным и информативным.

Example: I usually chat with my university friends about our lectures and seminars. We often share our opinions about the teachers and professors, especially when some of them don't meet our expectations in terms of professionalism.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит много пауз и незавершенных мыслей, что снижает его естественность и ясность. Рекомендуется структурировать ответ с четким утверждением, использовать связующие слова и завершать мысли, чтобы сделать речь более плавной и понятной.

Example: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I'm quite introverted. When there are more than two people, I find it difficult to focus on the conversation and pay attention to everyone. Therefore, one-on-one chats are more comfortable for me.

Suggestion: Ответ достаточно хороший, но содержит несколько пауз и нечетких слов. Рекомендуется использовать более плавные выражения и связующие слова для улучшения связности и естественности речи.

Example: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to observe nonverbal cues like posture and emotions. These signals are hard to interpret through text or even video calls, so seeing the person in person makes the interaction more meaningful.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит много пауз и нечетких выражений, а также немного неорганизован. Рекомендуется структурировать ответ с четким утверждением, использовать связующие слова и избегать лишних слов, чтобы сделать речь более естественной и понятной.

Example: I used to argue a lot with my friends because I was very competitive. However, as I've grown older, I decided to avoid confrontations to maintain peace, especially since I have fewer friends now. It's easier for me to stay calm and avoid conflicts.

× I did when I was younger, but now I just don't have enough friends.

✓ I liked chatting when I was younger, but now I just don't have enough friends.

The original sentence uses 'did' without a main verb, which is incorrect. The verb 'like' should be used in the past tense 'liked' to express past preference. Suggestion: use 'liked' to correctly indicate past liking.

× I also did video calls, so it was one of my best ideas on how to spend my free time.

✓ I also did video calls, so it was one of my best ways to spend my free time.

The phrase 'best ideas on how to spend' is awkward. 'Ways to spend' is more natural. The past tense 'did' is acceptable here, but the phrase needs correction for naturalness.

× I use different messengers.

✓ I used different messengers.

The context is about past habits when the student was younger, so the verb should be in past tense 'used' instead of present 'use'.

× we also like to give our own opinion about uh teachers, uh and professors because some of them are not as professional as we would like them to see.

✓ we also like to give our own opinions about teachers and professors because some of them are not as professional as we would like them to be.

The phrase 'like them to see' is incorrect; it should be 'like them to be' to express desired qualities. Also, 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions' to match 'we'.

× I wouldn't say that I'm the most, uh, extroverted or introverted person in the world.

✓ I wouldn't say that I'm the most extroverted or introverted person in the world.

The sentence is correct but the commas around 'uh' are unnecessary. Removing filler words improves clarity.

× But it's hard for me to concentrate on the dialogue if it, uh, includes, uh, more than two people.

✓ But it's hard for me to concentrate on the dialogue if it includes more than two people.

Removing filler words 'uh' and unnecessary commas improves sentence clarity and flow.

× Because I want to pay attention to everyone and it's a good luck for me when there are.

✓ Because I want to pay attention to everyone, and it's good luck for me when there are fewer people.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'fewer people' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'a good luck' is incorrect; 'good luck' is uncountable and does not need 'a'.

× Face to face, obviously, uh, to me, social media is not enough because I'd like to see some, umm, nonverbal signs, uh, like the posture, the emotions.

✓ Face to face, obviously. To me, social media is not enough because I'd like to see some nonverbal signs, like posture and emotions.

Removing filler words and commas improves clarity. Also, 'the posture, the emotions' should be 'posture and emotions' without 'the' for general meaning.

× And it's very hard for me to understand this through text or through video calls.

✓ And it's very hard for me to understand this through text or video calls.

The repeated 'through' is unnecessary; using it once before the list is sufficient.

× No, I stopped doing it when there was a danger.

✓ No, I stopped doing it when there was danger.

The phrase 'when there was a danger' is awkward; 'when there was danger' is more natural and idiomatic.

× I was very competitive, so I used to argue a lot.

✓ I was very competitive, so I used to argue a lot.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× But now since I've grown up, uh, I uh, decided to, I just avoid confrontation as much as possible because I don't have so many friends now.

✓ But now since I've grown up, I just avoid confrontation as much as possible because I don't have many friends now.

The verb 'decided' is past tense but the context is present habit, so 'decided to' should be removed or changed to 'decide to'. Also, 'so many friends' is better as 'many friends' in negative sentences.

× So it's uh, easier for me to just decide to stop and be as calm as possible.

✓ So it's easier for me to just decide to stop and be as calm as possible.

Removing filler 'uh' improves sentence clarity.