Part 1
Examiner
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidate
No, I don't.
Examiner
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidate
I usually chat with my friends about my ex.
Examiner
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidate
I don't care that my partner is the group of people are only one friend, I just need someone to talk with me.
Examiner
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidate
While social media is my prefers 'cause you know, sometime, sometimes we can't easily face up with the emotions and express it, so it's better to not see the other person.
Examiner
Do you argue with friends?
Candidate
I don't argue with my friends.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn quá ngắn và thiếu chi tiết. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích lý do tại sao bạn không thích trò chuyện với bạn bè để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
Example: No, I don't like chatting with friends very much because I prefer spending time alone to relax and think about my own thoughts.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Bạn nên cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể giải thích tại sao bạn thường nói về người yêu cũ hoặc cảm xúc liên quan.
Example: I usually chat with my friends about my ex because I want to share my feelings and get advice on how to move on from the past relationship.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, đồng thời giải thích lý do để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
Example: I don't mind whether I chat with a group or just one friend because what matters to me is having someone to talk to when I need support.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, đồng thời làm câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn bằng cách sử dụng liên từ hợp lý và sắp xếp ý hợp lý.
Example: I prefer communicating via social media because sometimes it's hard to express emotions face-to-face, so it's easier to share feelings without seeing the other person directly.
Do you argue with friends?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn ngắn và thiếu chi tiết. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích lý do hoặc đưa ví dụ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
Example: I don't argue with my friends because we usually respect each other's opinions and try to solve problems calmly.
× I don't care that my partner is the group of people are only one friend, I just need someone to talk with me.
✓ I don't care whether my partner is a group of people or just one friend, I just need someone to talk to me.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'that' and 'are' in a conjunction context. The correct conjunction to express alternatives is 'whether', and 'or' should be used to connect the two options. Also, 'talk with me' should be 'talk to me' for correct preposition usage.
× I don't care that my partner is the group of people are only one friend, I just need someone to talk with me.
✓ I don't care whether my partner is a group of people or just one friend, I just need someone to talk to me.
The phrase 'talk with me' is less common and less appropriate here; the correct preposition is 'talk to me' when indicating the person you are speaking to.
× While social media is my prefers 'cause you know, sometime, sometimes we can't easily face up with the emotions and express it, so it's better to not see the other person.
✓ While social media is my preference because, you know, sometimes we can't easily face the emotions and express them, so it's better not to see the other person.
The word 'prefers' is a verb and incorrectly used; the noun 'preference' is correct here. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Face up with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'face the emotions'. 'Express it' should be 'express them' to agree with the plural 'emotions'. Also, 'better to not see' should be 'better not to see' for correct adverb placement.