Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding repetition and filler words. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. For example, instead of repeating 'I like', say 'Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends from college and high school because I like to hear about their daily activities and current situations.'

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends from college and high school because I like to hear about their daily activities and current situations.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to make your sentences clearer and more coherent by using linking words. Also, be more specific about the topics you discuss. For example, you can say, 'I usually chat with my friends about our jobs and personal lives so that we can learn from each other's experiences and share advice.'

Example: I usually chat with my friends about our jobs and personal lives so that we can learn from each other's experiences and share advice.

Suggestion: This answer does not address the question and is inappropriate. Always answer the question directly with a clear opinion and supporting details. For example, 'I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deeper conversations and better understanding.'

Example: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deeper conversations and better understanding.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. For example, say, 'I prefer face-to-face communication because social media can hide people's true feelings. In person, we can see each other's expressions and be more honest.'

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because social media can hide people's true feelings. In person, we can see each other's expressions and be more honest.

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words and improve grammar. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, 'I believe arguments are a natural part of conversations because everyone has the right to express their opinions, even if they differ.'

Example: I believe arguments are a natural part of conversations because everyone has the right to express their opinions, even if they differ.

× I had multiple friends from college, from high school, and I do like, I like, uh, chatting with them.

✓ I have multiple friends from college, from high school, and I do like, I like, uh, chatting with them.

The verb 'had' is in the past tense, but the context suggests a present situation. The correct verb should be 'have' to indicate current possession of friends.

× I'd like to chat with my friends about multiple current uh, subjects such as uh, our occupation, our current situation, so we can maybe uh, learn from each other mistakes or activities so we can share one.

✓ I'd like to chat with my friends about multiple current, uh, subjects such as, uh, our occupations, our current situations, so we can maybe, uh, learn from each other's mistakes or activities so we can share one.

The nouns 'occupation' and 'situation' should be plural to match 'our' referring to multiple people. Also, 'each other' requires a possessive form 'each other's' before 'mistakes'.

× Not ask me to explain things because you're not giving me enough time? Please.

✓ Please don't ask me to explain things because you're not giving me enough time.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. It should be a polite request starting with 'Please don't' followed by the verb in base form.

× I feel like social media hide through feelings of people so I think communicating face to face is better so both sides can see our expressions and we can like be honest more.

✓ I feel like social media hides people's feelings, so I think communicating face to face is better because both sides can see our expressions and we can be more honest.

The verb 'hide' should be 'hides' to agree with singular subject 'social media'. The phrase 'hide through feelings of people' is incorrect; it should be 'hides people's feelings'. Also, 'like be honest more' is awkward; 'be more honest' is correct.

× I feel like arguments are part of conversations. I mean everyone have the right to express their opinion even if it's not in the same uh position with the other person.

✓ I feel like arguments are part of conversations. I mean everyone has the right to express their opinion even if it's not in the same, uh, position as the other person.

The subject 'everyone' is singular and requires the verb 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, the phrase 'in the same position with' should be 'in the same position as'.