Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 중복되는 표현이 있습니다. 'umm' 같은 불필요한 말은 줄이고, 문장을 명확하게 구성하세요. 예를 들어, 친구들과 생각을 나누고 그들의 의견을 듣는다는 점을 간결하게 표현하는 것이 좋습니다.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows me to share my thoughts and listen to their opinions.

Suggestion: 답변이 중복되고 문장이 완성되지 않은 부분이 있습니다. 'umm' 같은 불필요한 말은 줄이고, 구체적인 내용을 명확하게 전달하세요. 예를 들어, 취미에 대해 이야기할 때 구체적인 활동과 경험을 자연스럽게 연결하는 것이 좋습니다.

Example: Usually, I chat about our hobbies, such as playing basketball or billiards, and we often discuss the scores we achieved during the games.

Suggestion: 답변이 다소 어색하고 문법적으로 부정확한 부분이 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요.

Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it's easier to focus on their opinion without distractions from a large group.

Suggestion: 'umm' 같은 불필요한 말은 줄이고, 문장을 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 만드세요. 상대방의 표정과 어조를 볼 수 있다는 점과 의사 전달이 더 명확하다는 점을 간결하게 표현하는 것이 좋습니다.

Example: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because I can see the other person's expressions and tone, which helps me convey my message more clearly.

Suggestion: 문법 오류와 불필요한 말이 많고 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. 문장을 명확하고 간결하게 구성하고, 자신의 성격과 논쟁하는 주제에 대해 구체적으로 설명하세요.

Example: To be honest, I'm not an easy-going person, so I often argue with my friends about political issues or other important topics, and sometimes our arguments become quite serious.

× I really like chatting with friends because when I chat with my friends I can share my thoughts and umm, I can also hear the friends that.

✓ I really like chatting with friends because when I chat with my friends I can share my thoughts and umm, I can also hear what my friends say.

'the friends that' is incorrect because 'that' is a relative pronoun that needs a verb to complete the clause. The correct phrase is 'what my friends say' to express hearing their opinions or words.

× Umm, usually I chat about our hobby, for example, umm, my hobby is playing basketball or playing billiard and we usually chat about how, how, how much score did you get during?

✓ Umm, usually I chat about our hobbies, for example, umm, my hobby is playing basketball or playing billiards and we usually chat about how much score you got during the game.

The word 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' because it refers to multiple people's interests. Also, 'billiard' should be 'billiards' as the correct term for the game. The question 'how much score did you get during?' is incomplete and should be rephrased to 'how much score you got during the game'.

× I think I prefer to chat with only one friend because if there are a lot there, if there are lots of people, we cannot concentrate to 1's opinion.

✓ I think I prefer to chat with only one friend because if there are a lot of people, we cannot concentrate on one person's opinion.

'a lot there' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of people'. Also, 'concentrate to 1's opinion' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'concentrate on' and '1's opinion' should be 'one person's opinion'.

× I definitely prefer to communicate face to face because if I talk face to face, umm, I can see the opponent's expression and tone and also what I want to say can deliver more clearly.

✓ I definitely prefer to communicate face to face because if I talk face to face, umm, I can see the other person's expression and tone and also what I want to say can be delivered more clearly.

'opponent's' is not appropriate in this context; 'other person's' is better. Also, 'can deliver more clearly' is incorrect; the passive form 'can be delivered more clearly' is needed to express that the message is conveyed clearly.

× MMM to be honest I'm not a easy going person so I usually argue with my friends about political issues or some important things we or we sometimes also reach to until fight.

✓ MMM to be honest I'm not an easy-going person so I usually argue with my friends about political issues or some important things and sometimes we even reach the point of fighting.

'a easy going' should be 'an easy-going' because 'easy' starts with a vowel sound. The phrase 'we or we sometimes also reach to until fight' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be rephrased to 'sometimes we even reach the point of fighting' to express escalation properly.