Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar errors for a more natural flow.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because, although I have a small circle, we share everything openly. Moreover, we often make fun of each other, which makes our conversations lively and supportive. This is especially helpful since I have a hectic work schedule, so having friends to rely on feels like a true blessing.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific examples to enrich your answer.

Example: I usually chat with my friends about incidents that happened at work or during family events. Since most of my friends are from college, they know a lot about me. Therefore, talking to them is really relaxing and helps me stay motivated.

Suggestion: Work on grammar, especially subject-verb agreement and article usage. Avoid filler words and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Example: I prefer chatting with my best friend from college because she knows everything about me. Sometimes, it's difficult to share certain things with a group, even if they are friends. Since I am an introvert, I feel more comfortable talking to just one close friend.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition for a more natural and effective response.

Example: I prefer communicating face-to-face rather than using social media because it helps me understand the other person's reactions better. Moreover, I feel that I cannot express myself as freely and honestly through social media or video calls.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, correct grammar mistakes and make your answer more concise and natural.

Example: No, I don't argue with my friends because I prefer to talk things over in person if something feels off. We discuss the issue calmly, clarify any misunderstandings, and resolve them happily.

× I have a very small friend circle.

✓ I have a very small circle of friends.

The phrase 'friend circle' is not commonly used; 'circle of friends' is the correct plural form to indicate a group of friends. This corrects the singular/plural usage and improves naturalness.

× Still, we share everything uh, with each other.

✓ Still, we share everything with each other.

The filler 'uh' is unnecessary and interrupts the flow. Removing it improves clarity and correctness.

× It's really supportive because having a hectic work schedule and having some friends to back you as a gift.

✓ It's really supportive because having a hectic work schedule and having some friends to back you is like a gift.

The original sentence lacks a proper verb and clear structure. Adding 'is like a gift' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Most of my friends which I am friends with is my college means so they know majority of things about me.

✓ Most of my friends whom I am friends with are from my college, so they know the majority of things about me.

The subject 'Most of my friends' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'which' should be 'whom' for people, and 'means' should be 'means' corrected to 'from my college'. Adding commas improves clarity.

× I prefer chatting with that only friend which I have which is my best friend from my college.

✓ I prefer chatting with the only friend I have, who is my best friend from my college.

'That only friend which I have' is awkward; 'the only friend I have, who is...' is more natural. Also, 'which' should be 'who' when referring to people.

× She know everything about me so sometimes it's difficult to share certain things uh with a group of people even though they are friends with me.

✓ She knows everything about me, so sometimes it's difficult to share certain things with a group of people even though they are friends with me.

The verb 'know' should be 'knows' to agree with the third person singular subject 'She'.

× I am a introvert so I I prefer chatting with that only friend I have.

✓ I am an introvert, so I prefer chatting with the only friend I have.

'a introvert' should be 'an introvert' because 'introvert' starts with a vowel sound. Also, repeated 'I' is a mistake and 'that only friend' should be 'the only friend' for correctness.

× I prefer communicating face to face than we are using social media because it helps me understand what is the reaction I'm getting from opposite side while chatting or speaking in social media or Facetiming.

✓ I prefer communicating face to face rather than using social media because it helps me understand the reaction I'm getting from the opposite side while chatting or speaking on social media or Facetiming.

'than we are using' is incorrect; 'rather than using' is correct. Also, 'in social media' should be 'on social media'. Added 'the' before 'reaction' and 'opposite side' for correctness.

× In social media I don't think I can express myself freely and honestly.

✓ On social media, I don't think I can express myself freely and honestly.

The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to social media platforms.

× So we discussed that particular thing, We clarify our thoughts or misunderstanding and more happily.

✓ So we discuss that particular thing, clarify our thoughts or misunderstandings, and feel happier.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Consistent present tense is better here. Also, 'misunderstanding' should be plural 'misunderstandings', and 'more happily' is awkward; 'feel happier' is clearer.