Part 1
Examiner
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidate
I very like checking with friends because I find checking with friends can improve our relation and then we can more know about us and then we can know more about their favorite friends. So I think this is a good trust.
Examiner
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidate
Basketball maybe because I was a friend like basketball and then we always talk about talking about ombre like LeBron James, Stephen Kirby. So we are very many, many track professor yesterday.
Examiner
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidate
I think I really like to talk about good, good people. Because if good people have many, many choice, can I choose to talk? But only people? I think not too much. Sometimes you can't talk too long time. So I think group of people is good.
Examiner
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidate
I think maybe face to face because face to face can have many talk, but the social media I am not very using social media because sometimes I can't wash my phone because I'm busy. So I've been face to face with more better.
Examiner
Do you argue with friends?
Candidate
I'm I'll always **** you with friends, but that thing I just can improve our relation because you have argue and then you need to talk good for the same thing. So argues the good thing for have a check in.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如“very like checking”应为“really like chatting”。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并避免重复和冗长。可以先直接回答问题,然后用一两句具体理由支持。
Example: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps strengthen our relationship and allows us to understand each other better.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: 回答内容不清晰,语法和词汇错误较多,且缺乏连贯性。建议先明确主题句,然后用具体例子支持,避免重复和无意义的词汇。
Example: We usually chat about basketball because many of my friends like the sport. For example, we often discuss players like LeBron James and Stephen Curry.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: 表达不够清晰,句子结构混乱。建议先直接回答问题,然后用具体理由支持,使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Example: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it offers more choices and the conversation can last longer compared to talking with just one friend.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方,如“can't wash my phone”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构,表达清晰且简洁。
Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for more meaningful conversations. I don't use social media much since I'm often busy and can't check my phone frequently.
Do you argue with friends?
Score: 25.0Suggestion: 回答中有严重语法和表达错误,且不连贯。建议先明确表达观点,使用正确的句子结构,并用具体理由支持。
Example: I sometimes argue with my friends, but I believe it helps improve our relationship because it encourages us to communicate and understand each other better.
× I very like checking with friends because I find checking with friends can improve our relation and then we can more know about us and then we can know more about their favorite friends. So I think this is a good trust.
✓ I really like chatting with friends because I find chatting with friends can improve our relationship, and then we can know more about each other and also about their favorite things. So I think this builds good trust.
这里's checking'应为'chatting',且'relation'应为'relationship','more know about us'应改为'know more about each other','their favorite friends'应为'their favorite things'。复数和单数的使用不当,导致表达不清。建议注意名词的单复数形式和固定搭配。
× Basketball maybe because I was a friend like basketball and then we always talk about talking about ombre like LeBron James, Stephen Kirby. So we are very many, many track professor yesterday.
✓ Maybe basketball because I and my friends like basketball, and then we always talk about players like LeBron James and Stephen Curry. So we had a lot of discussions yesterday.
'I was a friend like basketball'应为'I and my friends like basketball','talk about talking about ombre'应为'talk about players','Stephen Kirby'应为'Stephen Curry','we are very many, many track professor yesterday'语法错误,改为'we had a lot of discussions yesterday'。复数形式和名词使用错误,需注意名词的正确复数形式和搭配。
× I think I really like to talk about good, good people. Because if good people have many, many choice, can I choose to talk? But only people? I think not too much. Sometimes you can't talk too long time. So I think group of people is good.
✓ I think I really like to talk with good people. Because if good people have many choices, I can choose whom to talk to. But with only one person, I think it's not much. Sometimes you can't talk for too long. So I think a group of people is better.
'good, good people'重复且不自然,改为'good people';'many choice'应为'many choices';'only people'应为'only one person';'group of people is good'应为'a group of people is better'。注意单复数和冠词的正确使用。
× I think maybe face to face because face to face can have many talk, but the social media I am not very using social media because sometimes I can't wash my phone because I'm busy. So I've been face to face with more better.
✓ I think maybe face to face because face to face allows more conversation, but I don't use social media much because sometimes I can't check my phone as I'm busy. So face to face communication is better.
'face to face can have many talk'应为'face to face allows more conversation';'I am not very using social media'应为'I don't use social media much';'can't wash my phone'应为'can't check my phone';'I've been face to face with more better'语法错误,改为'face to face communication is better'。注意介词和动词搭配的正确使用。
× I'm I'll always **** you with friends, but that thing I just can improve our relation because you have argue and then you need to talk good for the same thing. So argues the good thing for have a check in.
✓ I don't always argue with friends, but arguing can improve our relationship because when you argue, you need to talk well about the same thing. So arguing is a good thing to have a check-in.
'I'm I'll always **** you'语法错误,改为'I don't always argue';'I just can improve'应为'can improve';'you have argue'应为'you argue';'talk good'应为'talk well';'argues the good thing for have a check in'应为'arguing is a good thing to have a check-in'。注意情态动词和动词形式的正确使用。