Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then explain briefly without repeating phrases. Avoid redundancy like "it's really it's really" and complete your thoughts clearly.

Example: No, I don't usually like chatting with friends because I am an introvert. When my social energy is low, it becomes difficult for me to communicate effectively.

Suggestion: Focus on giving a clear and specific answer. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and be more precise about the topics you discuss.

Example: When I chat with my friends, we usually talk about our mutual friends and sometimes discuss negative experiences we have encountered recently.

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent and avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh'. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with a reason. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I prefer talking to only one friend because I find group conversations overwhelming and less personal.

Suggestion: Try to organize your answer better by starting with your preference and then explaining why. Avoid filler phrases like 'like, you know' and unclear sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer communicating via social media when I feel tired or bored because it is more convenient. However, I also enjoy face-to-face conversations when possible.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more complete. Avoid grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically and provide a concluding thought.

Example: Sometimes I argue with friends because it is difficult when they don't understand my point of view. However, I appreciate being around friends who truly understand me.

× No I don't. I don't usually talk with my friends because being an introvert person it really it's really hard to communicate with them especially when my social battery is going down so I still prefer.

✓ No, I don't. I don't usually talk with my friends because, being an introverted person, it's really hard to communicate with them, especially when my social battery is going down, so I still prefer not to.

The phrase 'being an introvert person' should be 'being an introverted person' to correctly use the adjective form. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding commas and completing the last part for clarity. 'Introverted' is the correct adjective form to describe a person who is introvert. This correction helps the sentence flow better and be grammatically correct.

× If I'm talking with my friends or we do have like, uh, chat with each other, I think we talk about something about our friends or something people being around with us with, with giving us something negativity on the door.

✓ If I'm talking with my friends or we do have a chat with each other, I think we talk about our friends or about people around us who give us some negativity.

The phrase 'chat with each other' is better as 'a chat with each other' to use the noun form. The preposition 'about' is used correctly to indicate the topic. 'People being around with us with' is incorrect; it should be 'people around us who'. Also, 'giving us something negativity on the door' is incorrect; it should be 'who give us some negativity'. This correction clarifies the meaning and fixes preposition misuse.

× I'm not quite a person who really love to talk with someone else or to talk with a lot of people, so I choose or I prefer, uh, talking only to one person.

✓ I'm not really a person who really loves to talk with someone else or with a lot of people, so I choose, or I prefer, talking only to one person.

The verb 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with the singular subject 'person' (third person singular). Also, 'quite a person' is better as 'really a person' for naturalness. This correction fixes subject-verb agreement and improves sentence clarity.

× Sometimes I choose via social media. It helps me like, you know, if you're tired or bored somehow. You did, you didn't want to go out. But yeah, I can still do both. I can communicate face to face or via social media.

✓ Sometimes I choose to communicate via social media. It helps me, like, you know, if I'm tired or bored somehow and don't want to go out. But yeah, I can still do both. I can communicate face to face or via social media.

The phrase 'choose via social media' is incomplete; it should be 'choose to communicate via social media'. Also, 'You did, you didn't want to go out' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't want to go out' to maintain first person perspective and correct tense. This correction improves preposition use and sentence clarity.

× Sometimes, yes, it's really hard to communicate with someone who really don't understand what you are saying or what is your opinion. Whoever it's be, it's being nice being around with someone who really understand you and also to.

✓ Sometimes, yes, it's really hard to communicate with someone who really doesn't understand what you are saying or what your opinion is. Whoever it is, it's nice to be around someone who really understands you.

The verbs 'don't' and 'understand' should be 'doesn't' and 'understands' to agree with the singular subject 'someone'. 'Whoever it's be' is incorrect; it should be 'Whoever it is'. The phrase 'it's being nice being around with someone' is corrected to 'it's nice to be around someone'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and improve sentence structure and clarity.