Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'I like to chatting' should be 'I like chatting'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'because' and 'and'.

Example: I like chatting with my friends because it is relaxing. They are kind and easy-going, and they patiently listen to my problems and offer helpful solutions, which makes me feel supported.

Suggestion: Avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like 'And'. Use clear and correct phrases such as 'talk about' instead of 'check about chat about'. Remove filler words and be more specific in your details. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' properly.

Example: Because we are all students, we usually talk about academic topics, such as our grades and our future plans. This helps me to have a better understanding of my goals.

Suggestion: Clarify your ideas and use correct expressions. For example, 'I was refused that' is unclear; you can say 'I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group'. Avoid filler words and use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am shy to talk with strangers. Also, I feel that my opinions are private and I don't like to share them with many people.

Suggestion: Try to use correct grammar and avoid filler words. For example, say 'we can see others' emotions quickly' instead of 'get the others emotions'. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your reasons clearly.

Example: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because we can see others' emotions quickly. In contrast, chatting via social media is virtual and sometimes we cannot understand the real meaning.

Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. For example, say 'arguing' instead of 'doing argue'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'if' properly. Also, try to express ideas more clearly and avoid filler words.

Example: Yes, sometimes we argue, but I don't think arguing with friends is bad because it helps us understand their true ideas. If we never argue, it might not be good for our relationship.

× I like to chatting with my friends because I think it's relaxing and also, umm, my friends, they are all kind and uh, easy going.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because I think it's relaxing and also, umm, my friends, they are all kind and uh, easy going.

The verb 'like' is followed by either the infinitive form 'to chat' or the gerund form 'chatting'. Using 'to chatting' is incorrect. The correct form here is 'like chatting'.

× They, uh, they are very patient of listening mind problems and always give me some solutions.

✓ They, uh, they are very patient in listening to my problems and always give me some solutions.

The phrase 'patient of listening' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'patient in listening to'. Also, 'mind problems' is unclear; 'my problems' is more appropriate.

× And because we are all students, we always check about chat about the academic umm, such as the grade and uh, what we prefer to do in the future, umm and to chat with them.

✓ And because we are all students, we always chat about academic things, such as grades and what we prefer to do in the future, umm, and chat with them.

The phrase 'check about chat about' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'chat about'. Also, 'the academic' should be 'academic things' or 'academic topics'.

× Actually I was refused that because I'm umm, very shy to talk with almost that umm, strangers.

✓ Actually I refuse that because I'm umm, very shy to talk with almost all umm, strangers.

'I was refused that' is incorrect; the student likely means 'I refuse that'. Also, 'almost that strangers' is incorrect; it should be 'almost all strangers'.

× Uh, I don't like to share my own opinion to others because I think it's private thing.

✓ Uh, I don't like to share my own opinion with others because I think it's a private thing.

The verb 'share' is followed by 'with' when indicating the person receiving the information. Also, 'private thing' needs the article 'a'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I think umm we can get the umm others emotions on their face quickly if we only chat on the via social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I think umm we can get the umm others' emotions on their face quickly; if we only chat via social media,

The phrase 'chat on the via social media' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'via social media'. Also, 'others emotions' should be possessive 'others''.

× It's was virtual and we can't get the real meanings.

✓ It's virtual and we can't get the real meanings.

'It's was' is incorrect; 'It's' is a contraction of 'It is'. Using both 'is' and 'was' together is wrong. The correct form is 'It's virtual'.

× Yes, sometimes we argue, but I don't think argue with friends is a bad thing because doing argue actually we can get more what others true, uh, ideas on their in their mind.

✓ Yes, sometimes we argue, but I don't think arguing with friends is a bad thing because by arguing, we can get more of others' true, uh, ideas in their minds.

The verb 'argue' needs to be in gerund form 'arguing' when used as a noun. Also, 'doing argue' is incorrect; 'by arguing' is correct. 'Others true ideas' needs possessive 'others'' and 'in their mind' should be plural 'in their minds'.

× And if we don't argue anymore, I don't think it's a good things.

✓ And if we don't argue anymore, I don't think it's a good thing.

'A good things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and 'a' is singular. The correct phrase is 'a good thing'.