Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir İngilizce kullanarak, cümlenizi daha kısa ve net yapmalısınız. Ayrıca, 'more easier' ifadesi yanlıştır, sadece 'easier' kullanılmalıdır.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends daily because it's an easier way to communicate than calling.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeleri var. Daha spesifik detaylar vererek ve bağlaçlar kullanarak cevabınızı geliştirebilirsiniz.

Example: My best friends and I usually chat at night about how our day went and share interesting experiences we've had.

Suggestion: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve belirsizlikler var. Daha net ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, 'So it is up to Nessa' ifadesi anlaşılır değil, açıklamalısınız.

Example: It depends; I usually chat with my university friends in a group, but when I want to talk to my best friend, I prefer one-on-one conversations.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda çok fazla dolgu kelimesi var ve bazı ifadeler doğal değil. Daha akıcı ve doğal ifadeler kullanarak, cümlenizi kısaltabilirsiniz.

Example: I prefer communicating via social media because it's easier and I don't have to prepare myself or dress up.

Suggestion: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar mevcut. Daha doğal ve doğru ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, 'we see argue is not necessity' ifadesi yanlış ve anlaşılmaz.

Example: I usually don't argue with my friends because we communicate well. If we have different opinions, we discuss them calmly and move on.

× Yes, I like chatting my friends umm, we, we chatting on daily basis umm, you know this is how we uh communicate it's more easier than you know, call and talk umm.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends. Umm, we chat on a daily basis. Umm, you know, this is how we communicate. It's easier than, you know, calling and talking. Umm.

The verb 'chat' requires the preposition 'with' when referring to the people you chat with. Also, 'we chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'we chat' to form a proper present tense sentence. 'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' already implies comparison; 'more' is redundant. Use 'easier' alone. Additionally, 'call and talk' should be 'calling and talking' to maintain parallel gerund forms.

× Yes, I like chatting my friends umm, we, we chatting on daily basis umm, you know this is how we uh communicate it's more easier than you know, call and talk umm.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends. Umm, we chat on a daily basis. Umm, you know, this is how we communicate. It's easier than, you know, calling and talking. Umm.

The phrase 'chatting my friends' is missing the preposition 'with'. The correct phrase is 'chatting with my friends'. Also, 'on daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis' to be grammatically correct.

× Well, me and my best friends, umm, we usually chat every single day. Uh, well we usually uh, chat at nights and we tell each other uh, how was our day, uh, and uh, the things we have been through or umm.

✓ Well, my best friends and I usually chat every single day. We usually chat at night and tell each other how our day was and the things we have been through.

The phrase 'how was our day' is incorrect in indirect speech; it should be 'how our day was'. Also, 'at nights' should be 'at night' as 'night' is generally uncountable in this context. 'Me and my best friends' should be 'my best friends and I' for correct subject pronoun usage.

× Well, me and my best friends, umm, we usually chat every single day. Uh, well we usually uh, chat at nights and we tell each other uh, how was our day, uh, and uh, the things we have been through or umm.

✓ Well, my best friends and I usually chat every single day. We usually chat at night and tell each other how our day was and the things we have been through.

The subject pronoun 'me' is incorrect here; it should be 'I' when used as the subject. Also, the order 'me and my best friends' is less formal; 'my best friends and I' is preferred.

× It depends, uh, if I like to talk with my university friends, we have a group, uh, so we chat on that group. Uh, but if I'd like to talk one of my friends, especially with my best friend, umm, I, I only talk with them. So it is up to Nessa.

✓ It depends. If I want to talk with my university friends, we have a group, so we chat in that group. But if I want to talk to one of my friends, especially my best friend, I only talk with him or her. So it is up to Nessa.

The phrase 'talk one of my friends' is missing the preposition 'to'. Also, 'I only talk with them' is ambiguous; if referring to one friend, use 'him or her'. 'Chat on that group' should be 'chat in that group'.

× It depends, uh, if I like to talk with my university friends, we have a group, uh, so we chat on that group. Uh, but if I'd like to talk one of my friends, especially with my best friend, umm, I, I only talk with them. So it is up to Nessa.

✓ It depends. If I want to talk with my university friends, we have a group, so we chat in that group. But if I want to talk to one of my friends, especially my best friend, I only talk with him or her. So it is up to Nessa.

The correct preposition with 'chat' when referring to a group is 'in', not 'on'. Also, 'talk one of my friends' requires the preposition 'to' after 'talk'.

× I prefer to communicate, umm, throughout social media because, umm, I mean it's easier and there's no need to, umm, get ready to show yourself, uh, you know, no need to make up or uh, you know, wear a good clothes so it's easier.

✓ I prefer to communicate through social media because it's easier and there's no need to get ready to show yourself, you know, no need to put on makeup or wear good clothes, so it's easier.

The phrase 'throughout social media' is incorrect; 'through social media' is correct. 'Make up' as a noun should be 'put on makeup' as a verb phrase. 'Wear a good clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural and does not take 'a'; it should be 'wear good clothes'.

× I prefer to communicate, umm, throughout social media because, umm, I mean it's easier and there's no need to, umm, get ready to show yourself, uh, you know, no need to make up or uh, you know, wear a good clothes so it's easier.

✓ I prefer to communicate through social media because it's easier and there's no need to get ready to show yourself, you know, no need to put on makeup or wear good clothes, so it's easier.

The phrase 'a good clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural and uncountable in this context; it should be 'good clothes' without 'a'.

× I usually don't argue with my friends. We have a good uh, communication and. If you have any separate ideas, we just talk about it and we're done. Umm, we we see argue is not necessity.

✓ I usually don't argue with my friends. We have good communication. If we have any different ideas, we just talk about them and we're done. Umm, we see arguing is not necessary.

The phrase 'If you have any separate ideas' is incorrect because the speaker should use 'we' to refer to themselves and their friends. 'Separate ideas' is better expressed as 'different ideas'. 'We see argue is not necessity' is incorrect; it should be 'we see arguing is not necessary'. Also, 'a good communication' is incorrect because 'communication' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.