Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和冗余表达。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更地道的表达方式。

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and relieve stress. For instance, during my senior high school days, I often felt stressed, so talking about interesting topics helped me feel better.

Suggestion: 回答内容较丰富，但最后一句表达不准确，词汇使用不当。建议注意用词准确，避免语法错误。

Example: I usually talk with my friends about our daily lives, including school, work, and exams. We also discuss new movies, fashion trends, and celebrities we like. These conversations help strengthen our friendship and keep us connected.

Suggestion: 回答不连贯，有重复和语法错误。建议简洁表达观点，使用正确的语法和连贯的句子。

Example: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用更准确的句子结构，清楚表达原因。

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand not only what the person is saying but also their facial expressions and emotions.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。建议完整表达观点，注意时态和主谓一致。

Example: Yes, I do argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics. For example, this summer my friend had to choose her university major. She used to want to be a lawyer, but now she is considering other options.

× Absolutely yes. For me, it is an approach to relax myself and relieve stress on because for example, in my Senior High School I always felt stressed, so after some difficult lessons I would, uh, talk some interesting things.

✓ Absolutely yes. For me, it is an approach to relax myself and relieve stress because, for example, in my Senior High School I always felt stressed, so after some difficult lessons I would, uh, talk about some interesting things.

句中“relieve stress on”中的介词“on”使用错误，应去掉或改为“because”引导原因状语。介词使用错误会影响句意表达。建议学习常用介词搭配。

× Talking about these topics helps ruins in our friendship and keeps us connected.

✓ Talking about these topics helps to strengthen our friendship and keeps us connected.

原句中“helps ruins in our friendship”结构错误，动词“helps”后应接动词不定式或动名词，且“ruins in our friendship”表达不当，应改为“strengthen our friendship”。建议注意动词搭配和固定表达。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think I think discuss with one. Just one people can deepen your values.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think discussing with one person can deepen your values.

“Just one people”中“people”是复数，前有“one”应使用单数“person”。此外，“I think I think discuss with one”结构不完整，应改为“I think discussing with one person”。建议注意单复数和句子完整性。

× I prefer to face to face chatting, umm, because if I can face a real person, I can know their understanding from not their what they're talking, but also what they look like, their umm emotions, their faces.

✓ I prefer face-to-face chatting, umm, because if I can face a real person, I can understand not only what they're talking about, but also what they look like, their emotions, their faces.

“prefer to face to face chatting”中“to”多余，应改为“prefer face-to-face chatting”。“know their understanding from not their what they're talking”表达混乱，应改为“understand not only what they're talking about”。建议注意介词搭配和句子表达清晰。

× For example, this summer my friend have to choose her uh, university major.

✓ For example, this summer my friend has to choose her, uh, university major.

主语“my friend”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”，而非复数“have”。建议注意主谓一致。