Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'chatting with friends' repeated multiple times. Also, the phrase 'to actually grant jokes' is unclear; instead, use simpler expressions like 'we often joke around'. Try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it keeps me entertained and helps me relax. We often joke around and tease each other, which makes our conversations lively and fun.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has some repetition and filler words like 'but but' and 'uh'. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, be more specific about the topics and avoid vague phrases like 'some topic'.

Example: We usually chat about various topics, but often we discuss movies and our university lecturers. Sometimes, we tease each other about funny incidents related to these topics, which makes our conversations enjoyable.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors like 'friends group which art'. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to express your ideas more clearly and directly. Use linking words to contrast your preferences and be concise.

Example: I don't have a strong preference between chatting in a group or one-on-one. If I'm with a group of friends, we joke around and have lively conversations. However, if there is a specific topic to discuss, I prefer chatting privately with that friend.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and by using more natural expressions. Also, explain why face-to-face communication is more efficient to add depth to your answer.

Example: I prefer communicating face-to-face because it allows for better understanding through body language and immediate responses. However, if meeting in person is not possible, I use social media to stay connected.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural by avoiding awkward phrases like 'I don't call it as argue'. Use simpler expressions such as 'we like to debate'. Also, provide clearer examples and use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: We often debate with friends, but I wouldn't call it arguing. For instance, we enjoy discussing popular topics like cricket, especially the IPL, which makes our conversations interesting.

× I do like chatting with friends, that keeps me busy and I feel entertained while chatting with them.

✓ I do like chatting with friends; that keeps me busy and I feel entertained while chatting with them.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence. Using a semicolon or separating into two sentences improves clarity and correctness.

× To actually grant jokes, they pull someone's legs and it's quite interesting for me to chat with friends.

✓ To actually tell jokes, they pull someone's legs and it's quite interesting for me to chat with friends.

The phrase 'grant jokes' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'tell jokes' when referring to sharing jokes.

× There is no particular topic we chat on, but but quite a few times we chat about movies and uh, we talk about university lecturers, so we make fun of each other regarding some topic which gives a lively and fun.

✓ There is no particular topic we chat about, but quite a few times we chat about movies and, uh, we talk about university lecturers, so we make fun of each other regarding some topics which makes it lively and fun.

The correct preposition with 'chat' is 'about' not 'on'. Also, 'some topic' should be plural 'some topics' to match the context, and 'gives' should be 'makes' to correctly describe the effect.

× There is no particular topic we chat on, but but quite a few times we chat about movies and uh, we talk about university lecturers, so we make fun of each other regarding some topic which gives a lively and fun.

✓ There is no particular topic we chat about, but quite a few times we chat about movies and, uh, we talk about university lecturers, so we make fun of each other regarding some topics which makes it lively and fun.

The phrase 'some topic' is singular but should be plural 'some topics' to agree with the plural context. Also, 'gives a lively and fun' is incomplete; 'makes it lively and fun' is correct.

× If there is no option for uh, in person chatting, I'll just go with the social media.

✓ If there is no option for, uh, in-person chatting, I'll just go with social media.

'Social media' is uncountable and does not require 'the'. Also, 'in person' should be hyphenated as 'in-person' when used as an adjective.

× We actually argue a lot, so I don't call it as argue and we just debate on topics which are really quite popular in these days.

✓ We actually argue a lot, so I don't call it arguing and we just debate topics which are really quite popular these days.

The phrase 'call it as argue' is incorrect; it should be 'call it arguing'. Also, 'debate on topics' should be 'debate topics' without 'on'. 'In these days' should be 'these days'.

× For example, we just discuss on cricket topics which is related to IPL.

✓ For example, we just discuss cricket topics which are related to IPL.

'Discuss on' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require a preposition. Also, 'topics which is' should be 'topics which are' to agree in number.