Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use simpler and correct phrases like 'I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows us to spend more time together and discuss our studies.'

Example: I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows us to spend more time together and discuss our studies.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, say 'We usually chat about our studies to exchange ideas and gain knowledge, which helps us discover new things together.'

Example: We usually chat about our studies to exchange ideas and gain knowledge, which helps us discover new things together.

Suggestion: Make your answer more coherent and avoid repetition. Use linking words and clear structure, for example: 'Although group discussions are common, I prefer chatting with one friend because I can share more about myself and our daily routines.'

Example: Although group discussions are common, I prefer chatting with one friend because I can share more about myself and our daily routines.

Suggestion: Clarify your preference and use correct grammar. For example, say 'I prefer both face-to-face communication and social media because both help me stay connected with my friends.'

Example: I prefer both face-to-face communication and social media because both help me stay connected with my friends.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and grammatically correct. For example, say 'Sometimes we argue, mostly about our studies, because we have different opinions on various topics.'

Example: Sometimes we argue, mostly about our studies, because we have different opinions on various topics.

× Yeah, I like to do chatting with my friends because it helps me to spend my much more time with them so we can be hang out sometime and talk about sometimes during our studies.

✓ Yeah, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me spend much more time with them so we can hang out sometimes and talk during our studies.

The phrase 'like to do chatting' is incorrect; 'like chatting' is the correct form using the verb + -ing form (Grammar problem type 8). Also, 'be hang out' is incorrect; it should be 'hang out' as a verb phrase. 'Spend my much more time' is awkward; 'spend much more time' is correct. 'Sometimes' should be placed correctly as an adverb.

× Talk more about about our studies to gain knowledge and exchange of ideas. So it can be very helpful for us to find out new things and new thoughts together.

✓ We talk more about our studies to gain knowledge and exchange ideas. This can be very helpful for us to discover new things and new thoughts together.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has repeated words ('about about'). The sentence structure is incomplete. Adding 'We' as subject and correcting 'exchange of ideas' to 'exchange ideas' improves clarity and grammar (Grammar problem type 26).

× People in our daily talks are in Group discussion. I love to be with only my one friend with whom I can talk more about myself and and about and about our daily routine.

✓ People in our daily talks are in group discussions. I love to be with only one friend with whom I can talk more about myself and our daily routine.

'Group discussion' should be plural 'group discussions' to match 'people' (plural). 'My one friend' is awkward; 'only one friend' is better. Repetition of 'and about' is an error. Correcting these addresses singular/plural and sentence clarity issues (Grammar problem type 1 and 26).

× I prefer both for communicate with my friends whether it's face to face or through social media. Both are physical for me.

✓ I prefer both ways to communicate with my friends, whether face to face or through social media. Both are important to me.

'For communicate' is incorrect; it should be 'to communicate' (Grammar problem type 11). 'Both are physical for me' is unclear; 'Both are important to me' conveys the intended meaning better.

× Times because of our our mostly in studies because I have a different topic and my friends has a different thoughts in different topic.

✓ Sometimes we argue mostly because of our studies, as I have different opinions and my friends have different thoughts on different topics.

'Times' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'My friends has' is incorrect; it should be 'my friends have' to agree in number (Grammar problem type 27). The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.