Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating 'chatting' too often and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences for better effectiveness.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax after a hectic day at work. Moreover, it makes me feel connected to others, which I really appreciate.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, be specific about the topics you discuss and avoid vague phrases like 'investigation through the arts'.

Example: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, work, and current news. For example, I often share my experiences with art projects, and we exchange opinions on recent events, which makes our conversations enjoyable.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific reasons.

Example: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it allows for deeper and more personal conversations. For instance, I can share secrets and feelings more comfortably than in a group setting, which tends to be more casual and relaxed.

Suggestion: Your answer has good points but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Avoid filler words and be more specific about why face-to-face communication is better. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see facial expressions and understand emotions better. Especially when discussing personal matters, in-person talks feel more trustworthy than social media.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain how you handle disagreements. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'different sounds'.

Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends because we have different opinions. However, we always try to stay calm and discuss our views respectfully without letting emotions take over.

× Chatting is a very good relaxed way when you have a very hectic work and chatting makes me feel I get connected with people so I like chatting so much.

✓ Chatting is a very good relaxed way when you have very hectic work and chatting makes me feel connected with people, so I like chatting so much.

The phrase 'a very hectic work' is incorrect because 'work' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural issue.

× I will share about my works and my investigation through the arts and my friends, they will exchange and they will share their opinions to the news, which is happy.

✓ I will share about my work and my investigation through the arts, and my friends will exchange and share their opinions about the news, which is happy.

The word 'works' should be 'work' because 'work' in this context is uncountable. Also, 'share their opinions to the news' is incorrect; it should be 'share their opinions about the news'.

× I prefer to chat with individual rather than a bunch of people because I think when you chat with only one individual, you can have a deeper conversation with each other.

✓ I prefer to chat with an individual rather than a bunch of people because I think when you chat with only one individual, you can have a deeper conversation with each other.

The phrase 'chat with individual' is missing the article 'an' before 'individual' because 'individual' is a singular countable noun.

× I prefer to communicate in individual because we can see each other's face impression and we can detect, uh, he or she emotion is happy or sad.

✓ I prefer to communicate with an individual because we can see each other's facial expressions and we can detect whether he or she is happy or sad.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; it should be 'with' when referring to communicating with someone. Also, 'face impression' is incorrect; the correct term is 'facial expressions'. The phrase 'he or she emotion is happy or sad' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'whether he or she is happy or sad'.

× When we talk about the secret, it needs face to face.

✓ When we talk about secrets, it needs to be face to face.

The phrase 'talk about the secret' is better as 'talk about secrets' for general meaning. Also, 'it needs face to face' is incomplete; it should be 'it needs to be face to face' to correctly express the idea.

× People don't always have a same opinion when there is some arguments.

✓ People don't always have the same opinion when there are some arguments.

The phrase 'a same opinion' is incorrect; 'same' is used with the definite article 'the'. Also, 'there is some arguments' is incorrect because 'arguments' is plural and requires 'there are'.

× We don't use emotion to do the conversation, but we use a very good way to have different sounds.

✓ We don't use emotion in the conversation, but we use a very good way to have different viewpoints.

The phrase 'use emotion to do the conversation' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' for 'use emotion in the conversation'. Also, 'have different sounds' is unclear and likely means 'have different viewpoints' or 'express different opinions'.