Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, jemon 'knowledges' er bodole 'knowledge' hobe. Sentence gulo ke aro natural korte, apni chesta korun short and clear sentence use korte. Apnar answer e kichu redundancy ache, tai eta komate hobe. Apni linking words use kore answer ke aro logical korte paren.

Example: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because I don't get many chances to meet them in person. Chatting helps me relax after a busy day at work. Moreover, I learn a lot about politics and social issues from our conversations.

Suggestion: Apnar answer e kichu repetition ache, jemon 'social and social systems'. Apni sentence gulo ke aro clear and concise korte paren. Linking words use kore answer ke aro coherent korte hobe. Specific example dile answer aro bhalo hobe.

Example: We often talk about our childhood memories, which remind us of the good times we shared. Additionally, we discuss current political and social systems, hoping to find ways to improve them together.

Suggestion: Apnar answer e filler words (uh) onek beshi, ja naturalness komay. Apni sentence gulo ke aro shundor vabe structure korte paren. Linking words use kore answer ke logical korte hobe. Vocabulary aro bistarito korte paren.

Example: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because it is more enjoyable and allows us to share ideas quickly. Moreover, I learn different things from each friend, which helps me contribute better to development.

Suggestion: Apnar answer e kichu repetition ache, jemon 'face to face to face' and 'we can we can'. Apni sentence gulo ke aro concise and clear korte paren. Linking words use kore answer ke aro logical korte hobe.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me connect emotionally. However, since I am very busy during the day, I often use social media to stay in touch and share knowledge.

Suggestion: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, jemon 'different men have different minds' er bodole 'different people have different opinions' bhalo hobe. Apni sentence gulo ke aro clear and natural korte paren. Linking words use kore answer ke aro coherent korte hobe.

Example: Since different people have different opinions, I sometimes argue with my friends about political and social issues. However, I learn a lot from these discussions. I believe that willingness to listen, compromise, and admit mistakes leads to better understanding.

× I have a lot of friends home, I don't have enough chance to meet in person so I like to chat with them because it helps me to refresh my mind after a long busy time at work.

✓ I have a lot of friends at home, but I don't have enough chances to meet them in person, so I like to chat with them because it helps me refresh my mind after a long busy time at work.

The word 'chance' should be plural 'chances' because it refers to multiple opportunities. Also, 'friends home' is missing the preposition 'at'. Adding 'at' before 'home' is necessary to indicate location.

× And also chatting with friends helps me to gain different knowledges about politics and social.

✓ And also chatting with friends helps me to gain different knowledge about politics and society.

The word 'knowledges' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, 'social' is an adjective and should be replaced with the noun 'society' to make sense in this context.

× Sometimes we talk about our childhood memories we have passed and I think that we have passed a very beautiful day together.

✓ Sometimes we talk about our childhood memories we have had, and I think that we spent very beautiful days together.

The phrase 'we have passed' is incorrect here; 'passed' is not used with memories. Instead, 'have had' or 'spent' is appropriate to describe experiencing memories or days. Also, 'a very beautiful day' should be plural 'very beautiful days' to match 'memories'.

× And sometimes we talk about our current political system and social and social systems so that we can improve the system as well and we together can do.

✓ And sometimes we talk about our current political and social systems so that we can improve them together.

The phrase 'social and social systems' is repetitive; it should be 'political and social systems'. Also, 'we together can do' is awkward and should be 'we can improve them together' for clarity and correctness.

× Personally, I prefer to chat with a group of friends because, uh, it is more enjoyable and, uh, I, we can share our knowledge and ideas, uh, to others, uh, more promptly.

✓ Personally, I prefer to chat with a group of friends because it is more enjoyable and we can share our knowledge and ideas with others more promptly.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to use with 'share ideas' is 'with'. Also, unnecessary fillers like 'uh' should be omitted for clarity.

× And, uh, we, uh, and personally, I can gain different type of knowledge from, uh, different friends, uh, so that I can contribute more in for the development.

✓ And personally, I can gain different types of knowledge from different friends so that I can contribute more to development.

The phrase 'different type of knowledge' should be pluralized to 'different types of knowledge' because it refers to multiple kinds. Also, 'in for the development' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to development'.

× Personally, I prefer to communicate personally face to face to face because it helps me to connect emotionally.

✓ Personally, I prefer to communicate face to face because it helps me connect emotionally.

The phrase 'face to face to face' is repetitive; it should be 'face to face'. Also, 'communicate personally' is redundant when 'face to face' is used.

× But nowadays as I remain really busy during the daytime so it is better to connect them virtually so that we can we can share our knowledge.

✓ But nowadays, as I remain really busy during the daytime, it is better to connect with them virtually so that we can share our knowledge.

The sentence has redundancy with 'so' and repeated 'we can'. Also, 'connect them' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'connect with them'. Proper commas improve sentence clarity.

× Well, as a different men have different minds, so sometimes I argue with my friends about political issues and about social issues.

✓ Well, as different men have different minds, sometimes I argue with my friends about political and social issues.

The phrase 'a different men' is incorrect because 'men' is plural and should not have the article 'a'. Also, 'about political issues and about social issues' can be combined for conciseness.

× But I believe that if there are willingness to hear and compromise and even confess can lead to better understand.

✓ But I believe that if there is willingness to listen, compromise, and even confess, it can lead to better understanding.

The phrase 'there are willingness' is incorrect; 'willingness' is singular and requires 'there is'. Also, 'to hear' should be 'to listen' for better meaning, and 'better understand' should be 'better understanding'. The sentence also needs proper conjunctions and commas for clarity.