Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and awkward phrases like "keeps me much pleasure" and "I feel so happy or blessing." Try to use more natural expressions and limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. Talking with them is always a pleasant experience that brightens my day.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid filler words and be specific about the benefits you get from these conversations.

Example: I usually talk with my friends about trending topics, sports, games, or university lectures. These conversations help me stay informed and improve my understanding of different subjects.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be clearer and more fluent. Avoid repeating words and try to use linking words like "however" or "but" to contrast your preferences. Also, use correct prepositions and articles.

Example: It depends on the situation. When discussing general topics, I prefer chatting in a group, but for personal or specific matters, I like to talk one-on-one with a friend.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but is repetitive and somewhat unclear. Try to express your points more smoothly and avoid filler words. Use linking words to compare the two methods clearly.

Example: I usually prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to express emotions and understand others. However, social media is useful for staying in touch with friends who live far away.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to complete your sentences fully and avoid repeating words. Also, provide a clear reason and example to support your answer.

Example: Sometimes I argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions about sports like cricket or football. For example, we might disagree about who the best player is.

× I like to chat with my friends because it keeps me much pleasure and I feel so happy or blessing when I talk with them.

✓ I like to chat with my friends because it gives me much pleasure and I feel so happy or blessed when I talk with them.

The phrase 'keeps me much pleasure' is incorrect because 'keep' is not used with 'pleasure' in this context. The correct verb is 'gives' to express receiving pleasure. Also, 'blessing' should be 'blessed' to correctly describe the feeling.

× I usually chat with my friends about the trending topic or like sports or games or some university lecture topic because it's give me, it's give me so much, uh, plus point and it's, it's give me so much, uh, benefit, You know, it's, it's like all that.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about trending topics like sports, games, or some university lecture topics because they give me so many benefits and plus points, you know, it's like all that.

'The trending topic' should be plural 'trending topics' to match the general meaning. 'It's give me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'they give me' to agree with plural subjects. 'So much benefit' should be 'so many benefits' because 'benefits' is countable here.

× It depends like when I discuss about some topic I I prefer to chat in Group or when I prefer to talk with individual my friend like individual topic or particular topic I like to discuss with my one friend.

✓ It depends; when I discuss some topics, I prefer to chat in a group, or when I prefer to talk with an individual friend about an individual or particular topic, I like to discuss with my one friend.

The phrase 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'. 'Chat in Group' needs an article: 'in a group'. 'Individual my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'an individual friend'. Also, 'my one friend' is better as 'one friend' or 'my friend'.

× Usually I prefer to communicate in face to face, uh, because it, it is easy to give any expression and it is, it is easy to communicate, you know, and social media is, is also a good platform to a long distance to communicate a long distance friend, friend and yes, all.

✓ Usually I prefer to communicate face to face because it is easy to express any feelings and it is easy to communicate, you know. Social media is also a good platform to communicate with friends over long distances, and yes, all.

The phrase 'communicate in face to face' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'communicate face to face' without 'in'. 'Give any expression' should be 'express any feelings'. 'To a long distance to communicate a long distance friend' is awkward; it should be 'to communicate with friends over long distances'.

× It depends like when the topic is about sports like cricket or football, uh, yes, obviously our, our favorite player is different, different. So, uh, it's may sometime we argue and we.

✓ It depends; when the topic is about sports like cricket or football, yes, obviously our favorite players are different. So, sometimes we argue.

'Our favorite player is different, different' is incorrect; it should be plural 'players are different' to agree with the plural subject. 'It's may sometime we argue and we' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'sometimes we argue' for clarity and correctness.