Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy sharing experiences and opinions with my friends. For example, we often discuss our future travel plans and interesting events from our week, which I find very enjoyable.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains awkward phrasing. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to be more specific. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and improve vocabulary usage.

Example: Usually, I talk about interesting topics and trending news on social media with my friends. This keeps our conversations up to date and helps me feel more connected and understand them better.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical mistakes. Use correct verb forms and articles. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly.

Example: I prefer chatting with one friend because it feels more personal. Moreover, one-to-one conversations help build a stronger connection between us.

Suggestion: Your answer is well structured but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and word choice. Use linking words to contrast ideas effectively.

Example: It depends on the situation. Sometimes, I prefer communicating through social media because it is more convenient and allows me to convey messages quickly. However, I choose face-to-face communication when the topic is important or personal, as it helps me understand emotions better.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Use correct verb forms and articles. Also, try to be more concise and use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Sometimes, I believe that arguments between friends can help us learn to communicate better. They can also strengthen our connection and lead to a deeper understanding of each other.

× I quite enjoy shared experience and opinion with my friend and sometimes we discuss our travel plans in the future and the the interesting things from our weeks.

✓ I quite enjoy sharing experiences and opinions with my friends and sometimes we discuss our travel plans for the future and the interesting things from our weeks.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a verb in the '-ing' form, so 'shared' should be 'sharing'. Also, 'experience' and 'opinion' should be plural to match the context. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to agree with 'shared experiences and opinions'. 'The the' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'the'. 'From our weeks' is acceptable but could be improved for clarity.

× Usually I share the interesting things and the trading topic on the social media with my friends.

✓ Usually I share interesting things and trending topics on social media with my friends.

The phrase 'the trading topic' is likely a mistake for 'trending topics'. Also, 'on the social media' should be 'on social media' without the definite article 'the'. 'The interesting things' can be simplified to 'interesting things' for naturalness.

× I find it connected to my friend and deeply understanding with him.

✓ I feel connected to my friends and understand them deeply.

The phrase 'I find it connected to my friend' is incorrect; 'feel connected to my friends' is more natural. Also, 'deeply understanding with him' is incorrect; it should be 'understand them deeply' to correctly use the verb and pronoun.

× I prefer chat with one friend because I can feel the personal touch and the words that come from them.

✓ I prefer chatting with one friend because I can feel the personal touch and the words that come from them.

After 'prefer', when followed by a verb, the gerund form '-ing' is used, so 'chat' should be 'chatting'.

× I prefer chat with one friend because I can feel the personal touch and the words that come from them.

✓ I prefer chatting with one friend because I can feel the personal touch and the words that come from him or her.

Since the subject is 'one friend' (singular), the pronoun should be singular 'him or her' instead of plural 'them'.

× Plus one to one conversation also build a strength, a strong connection with friends.

✓ Plus, one-to-one conversations also build strength and a strong connection with friends.

'One to one conversation' should be hyphenated as 'one-to-one conversations' and plural to match the verb 'build'. 'Build a strength' is incorrect; 'build strength' is the correct phrase. Also, adding a comma after 'Plus' improves readability.

× It depends on situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

The phrase 'depends on situation' requires the definite article 'the' before 'situation' to be grammatically correct.

× Sometimes I prefer to communicate through social media because it is more convenient and allow me to quickly convey my message.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to communicate through social media because it is more convenient and allows me to quickly convey my message.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'allows' to agree in the present tense.

× However, I use choose face to face communication when the topic is important or personal.

✓ However, I choose face-to-face communication when the topic is important or personal.

The phrase 'I use choose' is incorrect; it should be simply 'I choose'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective.

× Sometimes I believe argument between friends can help to learning how to communicate with each other better and build a strong connection and under a better understanding of each other.

✓ Sometimes I believe arguments between friends can help in learning how to communicate with each other better, build a strong connection, and gain a better understanding of each other.

'Argument' should be plural 'arguments' to match the context. 'Help to learning' is incorrect; it should be 'help in learning' or 'help learn'. 'Under a better understanding' is incorrect; it should be 'gain a better understanding'. Also, commas are added for clarity.