Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'closer' 대신 'get closer'를 사용하고, 과거 시제와 현재 시제를 명확히 구분하세요. 또한, 문장을 간결하게 구성하고 중복을 피하는 것이 좋습니다.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me get closer to them. However, when I was younger, I preferred playing outside rather than chatting.

Suggestion: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'sharing' 대신 'share'를 사용하고, 'can closer'는 'get closer'로 수정하세요. 또한, 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 만드세요.

Example: I usually chat about our interests, such as comics and dramas. By sharing our experiences, we become closer and I can learn more.

Suggestion: 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 많습니다. 'friend only one friend'는 'only one friend'로, 'confuse of'는 'confusing'으로 수정하세요. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it's easier to concentrate and the conversation is less confusing than in a group.

Suggestion: 답변이 다소 불완전하고 어색합니다. 'others emotions'는 'others' emotions'로 수정하고, 예시를 완성하여 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to fully understand others' emotions and opinions. For example, body language helps me grasp their feelings better.

Suggestion: 문장이 어색하고 중복된 접속사가 있습니다. 'when we on the debate'는 'when we have a debate'로 수정하고, 문장을 간결하게 만드세요.

Example: Of course, I sometimes argue with my friends, but not very often. When we do, it's usually like having a friendly debate.

× When we sharing our experience of comics and drama, we can closer and I can expand.

✓ When we share our experience of comics and drama, we can get closer and I can expand.

The verb 'sharing' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is the base verb 'share' after 'when'. Also, 'closer' needs a verb like 'get' to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer to chat with friend only one friend because when I chat with a group group of people I can't concentrate on conversation easily and it often confuse of.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because when I chat with a group of people I can't concentrate on the conversation easily and it often confuses me.

The word 'friend' should be plural or preceded by 'only one' correctly. 'Group group' is a repetition error. 'Conversation' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Confuse' should be 'confuses' to agree with the singular subject and needs an object.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to fully understand others emotions and opinions. Umm, for example body language is.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to fully understand others' emotions and opinions. For example, body language is important.

The phrase 'others emotions' needs a possessive apostrophe 'others''. The sentence 'Umm, for example body language is.' is incomplete and needs a complement like 'important' to be correct.

× I'm sure when I'm chatting with my friends I can closer with them, but when I was little I didn't like to chat with my friends because I like to go out and play with them.

✓ I'm sure when I'm chatting with my friends I can get closer to them, but when I was little I didn't like to chat with my friends because I liked to go out and play with them.

The phrase 'can closer' is incorrect; it should be 'can get closer to'. The verb 'like' in the past context should be 'liked' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I prefer to chat with friend only one friend because when I chat with a group group of people I can't concentrate on conversation easily and it often confuse of.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because when I chat with a group of people I can't concentrate on the conversation easily and it often confuses me.

The phrase 'confuse of' is incorrect; 'confuse' should be followed by an object without 'of'. Also, 'concentrate on conversation' needs the definite article 'the' before 'conversation'.